Question

假如你是新华中学的学生李华，刚参加完“美国高校一周游”的夏令营活动，在离开之前，你想给新结交的美国朋友Monica写一封感谢信，内容应包括以下要点：
1.表示感谢；
2.描述参加比次夏令营的收获；
3.邀请她参加明年在中国的夏令营。
注意：1.可适当添加细节使文章连贯；字数：120-150.
2.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Monica,
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              

Answer 1

不唯一
I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for your company while I was on this summer camp, which was an unforgettable experience for me and I also benefited a lot from it.
Through visiting American universities, I got a good knowledge of American universities-tourist attractions in some way, which broadened my horizon and introduced me to more about American culture. Besides, during the summer camp, I made some American friends, just like you, who gave me lots of assistance. Moreover, in an environment exposed to English language, my English listening and speaking skills got improved greatly.
Would you like to join the summer camp in China next summer? I'll be you best guide and you can experience traditional Chinese culture, and enjoy tasty Chinese food, etc.
I'm looking forward to your coming.

解析试题分析：这是一篇以写信形式的作文，注意信的格式，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化，尤其是数字的不同表达法。
考点：考查综合分析能力
点评：一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。