题目内容
【题目】书面表达
写作要求:对于“中学生是否应该带手机”,同学们各自持有不同的观点,请你根据下表内容的提示,用英语写一篇短文。陈述同学们的观点及理由,并谈谈你的观点及理由,发表在校园网的论坛上。不少于100个单词。
观点 | 理由 |
支持中学生带手机 | 1.方便学生与家长之间的联系。 2.便于学校通过手机短信发送通知。 |
反对中学生带手机 | 1.部分学生上课玩手机导致无法专心学习。 2. 带手机到学校并不安全,容易被盗。 |
你的理由和观点。 |
【答案】
Nowadays, mobile phones can be seen among middle school students frequently.
Some people support this idea of bringing mobile phones to school. Firstly, it will be convenient for students to keep in touch with their parents. Secondly, students can also get the notices sent by school quickly.
However, other people are against it. They argue that students will be distracted from their class if they use mobile phones. Besides, it is not safe to bring mobile phones to school for it may be stolen.
As far as I am concerned, we should not bring our mobile phones to school, as long-time using mobile phones will do harm to our health.
【解析】
试题分析:本文是关于是否应该带手机上学的话题的讨论,文章的要点很全,对于考生来说,只需要翻译成英文即可。写作时注意时态运用正确,文章采取总--分--总的模式,上下文意思连贯,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章更有档次。
【亮点说明】支持,赞成: support; 反对:be against ;keep in touch with sb和某人保持联系; as far as sb is concerned就某人而言;do harm to 对...有害
常用句型:It will be convenient for sb to do...做...对某人来说很方便;
Students can also get the notices sent by school quickly正确使用动词的过去分词形式做定语。
They argue that students will be distracted from their class if they use mobile phones.被动语态以及条件状语从句的使用,增加文章亮点。