Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I got up early this morning, so I went to school without breakfast. I walked in so a hurry that I stepped on a banana peel dropped by an old man walk in front of me. As the result, I slipped and fell in my back. I am so angry that I wanted to blame the old man, so I controlled myself at last. I picked out the banana peel, putting it into the dustbin and ran to school. The class had begun, but I was very happy because I did that what I should do to protect our environment.

Answer 1

【答案】

I got up this morning, so I went to school without breakfast. I walked in a hurry that I stepped on a banana peel dropped by an old man in front of me. As result, I slipped and fell my back. I so angry that I wanted to blame the old man, I controlled myself at last. I picked the banana peel, it into the dustbin and ran to school. The class had begun, but I was very happy because I did what I should do to protect our environment.

【1】early → late

【2】so → such

【3】walk→ walking

【4】the → a

【5】in → on

【6】am → was

【7】so → but

【8】out → up

【9】putting →put

【10】去掉that

【解析】

试题分析：

【1】early → late 考查副词及语义。由后一句so I went to school without breakfast可知“我”不是起床早而是晚。

【2】so → such 考查形容词。so是副词，常用于so + adj. + a/an + n.结构，such是形容词，常用结构为such + a//an + adj. + n.。

【3】walk→ walking 考查非谓语动词。根据句意，“我正匆忙地走着忽然踩在了一块由正走在我前面的老头扔的香蕉皮上”，由语境看老头正走着，故应用动词-ing形式作定语。

【4】the → a 考查冠词和固定搭配。as a result是固定短语，意为“结果”。

【5】in → on 考查介词。fall on one’s back意为“仰面朝天摔倒”，其中的介词on不可换成in。

【6】am → was。考查时态。根据上下文语境，这里叙述的是过去的事，前后都是用的过去时。

【7】so → but 考查连词。根据前后句及上下文逻辑关系看，前后句之间是转折关系，故用连词but。

【8】out → up 考查固定短语。动词短语pick up才是“捡起，拾起”之意，pick out意为“挑出，挑选”不符合语境语意。

【9】putting →put 考查动词形式。根据语境，这里用了几个连续动作，动词时态和形式应前后一致，故应用put的过去时put形式。

【10】去掉that 考查宾语从句。本句what直接引导宾语从句，并在从句中作宾语，that是多余的。