题目内容
5.假定你是李华,想在高中毕业后到英国留学,请你给外教Mr.Wilson发一封邮件,内容如下:1.说明留学的原因;
2.告知出国前强化语言的打算;
3.请他给你提几点建议(如:择校,住宿,交通等).
注意:1.词数:120-150;
2.可适当增加细节.以使行文连贯;
3.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数.
Dear Mr.Wilson,
How time flies!I will graduate from the senior middle school soon.
Best Wishes.
Yours truly,
Li Hua.
分析 高分句型一:
The most important reason why I want to study aborad is that I can learn English better in an English-speaking country 我想要出国留学的最重要的原因是我想在一个纯英语语言的国家里学习,那样才能更好的提高自己的英语.
高分句型二:
Apart from that,it is a good chance for me to prepare for a career,and I learn to be independent,which will benefit me greatly and promise me a bright future.
除此以外,对于我来说那也是一个很好的为以后的工作做准备的机会.而且,我能学着更独立自主,那将对我的未来有很大的帮助.
句型一 ①reason why I want to study aborad 该句是一个由why 作关系副词引导的定语从句,先行词为reason,why在定语从句中作原因状语
②that I can learn English better in an English-speaking country 该句是一个由that引导的表语从句,that在从句中不作句子成分
句型二 which will benefit me greatly and promise me a bright future该句是一个由which引导的非限制性定语从句,which在句中充当主语,替代前面整个主句的内容
解答 Dear Mr.Wilson,
How time flies!I will graduate from the senior middle school soon.I've decided to study abroad after graduation.
The most important reason why I want to study aborad is that I can learn English better in an English-speaking country.(高分句型一) What's more,I can experience different culture and widen my knowledge.Apart from that,it is a good chance for me to prepare for a career,and I learn to be independent,which will benefit me greatly and promise me a bright future.(高分句型二)(自我介绍)
My listening ability needs improving.I've planned to listen to the New Concept English,VOA,BBC news,and enjoy English film.I'll read as much on British literature and history as possible.
Which university do you recommend me to study in?Need I live in a home-stay family or a rented room or a dormitory?(寻求建议) I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice.
Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Lihua
点评 该书面表达为提纲类,该类作文一般规定了考生的写作思路,罗列出了写作要点.考生在写作时应将所列要点用合适的衔接词合理的联系起来,紧密联系主题,切忌过于发散思维.另外再运用准确的、简洁明了的语言将文章阐述清楚.

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1)只能使用5个句子表达全部内容;
2)作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称.
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句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯.
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C. | as much a part of his life as | D. | so much a part of his life as |
A. | is worn | B. | is wearing | C. | has worn | D. | wears |