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12．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Last week I went to visit to my former neighbor，Mr．Yang．He and I used to living next to each other for many years．About half a year ago，an order came which our old buildings，as well as many other similar ones，should be going to be pulled away to make room for a main street．So they had to move apart．Mr．Yang now lives in the suburbs near a beautiful park．His apartment is much big than before．The only problem is that it took quite a long time to get to the downtown area．Thus，Mr．Yang doesn't seem to worry about the long distance．He says that new subway line will be built in a few year and he is sure life will be better in the future．

分析 作者上周去拜访了曾经的邻居杨先生，半年前有消息说他们居住的地方要拆迁，所以他们就搬开了．杨先生现在住在郊区，进城里需要一些时间，但是杨先生并不在意这个，据说这里马上就要建一条新的地铁线，到时候就好多了．

解答 Last week I went to visit to my former neighbor，Mr．Yang．He and I used to living next to each other for many years．About half a year ago，an order came which our old buildings，as well as many other similar ones，should be going to be pulled away to make room for a main street．So they had to move apart．Mr．Yang now lives in the suburbs near a beautiful park．His apartment is much big than before．The only problem is that it took quite a long time to get to the downtown area．Thus，Mr．Yang doesn't seem to worry about the long distance．He says that∧new subway line will be built in a few year and he is sure life will be better in the future．
详解：
1．去掉to；考查介词，visit是及物动词，后面可以直接跟宾语，visit sb意为"拜访某人"．
2．living改为live；考查动词，used to do是固定短语，意为"过去常常做某事"．
3．which改为that；考查名词性从句，这里是一个同位语从句，要用that引导．
4．away改为down；考查动词短语，pull away意为"离开，脱身"，pull down 意为"拆毁，拉下"，结合上下文语境，此处要用pull down．
5．they改为we；考查人称代词，结合上下文分析，此处的人称代词指代Mr．Yang and I，故用人称代词we．
6．big改为bigger；考查形容词的比较级，根据句中的比较连词than可知此处要用比较级形式．
7．took改为takes；考查动词的时态，这里讲的是Mr．Yang 现在的情况，主语为it，故动词用第三人称单数形式．
8．Thus改为However；考查连词，结合上下文分析此处句意上存在转折关系，故用However，意为"然而"．
9．that后面加a；考查冠词，line是可数名词，前面加a表示泛指，a new subway line 指"一条新的地铁线"．
10．year改为years；考查名词单复数，a few后面要跟名词的复数形式．

点评 阅读短文，了解大意，确定基本时态；运用所掌握的基本知识多方面分析每个句子以及句子间的结构关系，找出文中错误加以修改．

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