Question

6．To make up a decision on science or arts learning in the future is a question that upsets a lot of student．Not considered the children's interests or preferences，some parents force their children to make the choice according to their own will，that troubles many students．
In my opinion，we students should talk to our parents or teachers about our decisions，especial life-changing ones．But in fact，when it returned to reality，we're the ones who must live with the choices．So I think parents should try to help their children make best decisions，instead of forcing them to do something that are against their will．
After all，it depends on ourselves whether we'll be science students and arts students．Just let our hearts show them the way．

Answer 1

分析 本文主要讲述许多学生在选择学文还是学理时，总是父母作出决定，这让学生感到不安．作者认为父母应帮助子女作决定，而不是迫使他们作出违背自己意愿的决定．

解答 To make up a decision on science or arts learning in the future is a question that upsets a lot ofstudent．Not considered the children's interests or preferences，some parents force their children to make the choice according to their own will，that troubles many students．
In my opinion，we students should talk to our parents or teachers about our decisions，especial life-changing ones．But in fact，when it returned to reality，we're the ones who must live with the choices．So I think parents should try to help their children make∧best decisions，instead of forcing them to do something that are against their will．
After all，it depends on ourselves whether we'll be science students and arts students．Just let our hearts show them the way．
详解：
1．去掉up 考查词语用法．make a decision意为"作出决定；下决心"，是固定搭配．
2．student改为studets 考查名词．student是可数名词，其前有a lot of时用复数形式．
3．comsidered改为considering 考查现在分词． parents与consider之间是主谓关系，用现在分词短语作状语．
4．that改为which 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词是前面整个句子，在从句中作主语，用关系代词which．
5．especial改为especially 考查副词．life-changing是形容词，要用副词修饰．
6．returned改为returns 考查动词时态．全文讲述的是一般事实，用一般现在时态．
7．加the 考查冠词．best是形容词最高级，其前加定冠词the．
8．are改为is 考查主谓一致．在定语从句中，谓语动词在数上与先行词一致，此处的先行词something是不定代词，谓语动词用单数is．
9．and改为or 考查连词． science students和arts students之间是选择关系，用连词or．
10．them改为us 考查代词．show后的宾语与our一致，用宾语代词us．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．