Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

On Monday, I was riding my bicycle to school. I was worried I'd be late for school because the heavy traffic. Suddenly, a car came towards me and passes very close to me at high speed. This caused me to lose my balance, that resulted in me fall off the bicycle. As a result, I injured in my ankle quite badly. I didn't know a speed at which the vehicle was traveling but obvious it appeared to me that it passed by me very quickly.

As I was falling onto the grounds, I saw the car crash into a white car. Therefore, the driver didn't stop and check what he had done. He just drove away. I really hope the driver could realize her fault and shoulder his responsibilities.

Answer 1

【答案】1. ... because the heavy traffic. because后加of

2. ... passes very close to me ... passes → passed

3. ... that resulted in ... that → which

4. ... fall off the bicycle. fall → falling

5. ... I injured in my ankle ... 去掉in

6. ... a speed at which ... a → the

7. ... but obvious ... obvious → obviously

8. ... falling onto the grounds ... grounds → ground

9. Therefore ... Therefore → However

10. ... realize her fault ... her → his

【解析】1.因为the heavy traffic是名词，而because后面用一个完整的句子，故在 because后加of。

2.根据On Monday可知文章用一般过去时态，故把 passes → passed。

3.句子This caused me to lose my balance做先行词，后面用which引导非限制性定语从句，故把 that → which。

4.介词后面用动名词作宾语，故把fall → falling。

5.此处injure是及物动词，后面直接跟宾语，故 去掉in 。

6.此处表示特指，“我不知道车辆行驶的速度”。故把a → the。

7.副词修饰整个句子，故把 obvious → obviously。

8.固定形式：在地上。故把grounds → ground。

9.句意：然而司机并没有停下来核实他做的事情。此处表示转折，故把Therefore → However。注意大写开头。

10.根据前面可知司机是一名男性，故把 her → his。