题目内容
【题目】前几天,李华的小区微信群里,朋友们开展了一场关于广场舞(Square Dancing)的热烈讨论.请你根据以下内容和提示,写一篇英语短文,谈谈广场舞的利与弊并说说你自己的看法。
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【答案】These years, Square Dancing has been more and more popular among old ladies. Meanwhile, it has also aroused wide concern and discussion.
As the saying goes, the first wealth is health. Some people think that Square Dancing is a good deed, which can help the old build up their bodies and make them happy.
But every coin has two sides. Some people argue that Square Dancing may disturb others and be bad for public order, especially the noise pollution. So, they hope some measures can be taken to protect them from the negative effects of Square Dancing.
In my opinion, we must think twice when taking Square Dancing. As a form of outdoor activities, Square Dancing should be supported. At the same time, limits and management are also required. Only in this way can we live a happy life.
【解析】本文是话题作文,要求作者对某件事提出看法。通常要求条理清晰,本文做到了。对于广场舞现象,首先提出它的重要性,接着说引发的话题讨论。在讨论过程中,分列了两种不同的观点,并作以解释,最后提出自己的观点。文章结构紧凑,布局合理。文章的亮点在于一些连接词和连接句的使用,比如meanwhile,as the saying goes, every coin has two sides,in my opinion,at the same time等等,使得文章过渡自然,浑然一体。复合句和简单句的交叉使用,使句子长短呼应,错落有致,作者对定语从句,宾语从句,状语从句和倒装句等的使用非常娴熟,可读性强。