Question

【题目】笫二节 书面表达（满分25分）

最近你校对学生的书写情况进行了调查．结果发现：随着电

脑的普及，学生们越来越不重视书写，其理由如右图所示。请根

据调查表提供的信息写一篇英语短文，介绍调查结果并发表自己

的看法。

注意：词数120左右，文章的开头已给出（不计入总词数）。

Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers,

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version

Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, more middle school students are paying less and less attention to handwriting.

According to a recent survey, many students don’t want to improve their handwriting for various reasons. 51.5 percent of the students think that they can just use a compuer, so there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting and 32.3 percent believe that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practice. 10.9 percent think that practising handwriting is useless. Yet the rest have other reasons.

As the saying goes, writing style shows the man. Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial, especially for middle school students. Therefore, in my opinion, more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in future.

【解析】 本文是应用文，要求学生就学生书写状况谈自己的看法，故应用一般现在时和一般现在时和第一人称。

文章的时态、语态使用得当，足见作者语言功底。文中使用了that引导的宾语从句，as引导的非限制性定语从句，practising短语作主语；高级词汇aspect，emphasiso等；还有灵活运用连词、插入语等充分彰显作者的英语水平。