Question

10．最近，校园安全成为人们广泛关注的话题，为确保师生安全，你校决定禁止外人进入校园．为此，学校在学生中做了一次"家长该不该进校园及其原因"的调查．调查结果如图所示：
       
根据上图信息，请以"Should parents be banned from entering campus？"为题，用英语写一篇短文．
要求如下：
1．简要描述图中的信息（包括人数比率、观点及原因）；2．谈谈你的看法．
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
 （2）符合语言规范；
 （3）在答题卡上作答；
 （4）标题已给出（不计入词数）
Should parents be banned from entering campus？
                                                                                   

Answer 1

分析 分析题干可知，本文写作时态为一般现在时，文章可使用被动语态以及固定短语．
写作过程：
第一：阐述最近校园安全存在的问题；To ensure security，为了确保安全；
第二：根据调查，进行分析；60% of the students think parents should be included；
25% subscribe to the view that there is no need for a ban as their parents come to school to meet their children or the teachers and they couldn't be a danger to anyone，百分之25的学生认为，通过学校联系，家长可以进校；
第三：发表个人的观点．As the saying goes prevention is better than cure，预防比治疗更好．

解答 Should parents be banned from entering campus？
    Recently，campus security has become a hot issue．To ensure security，strangers are banned from entering campus of our school，and a survey has been made among the students about whether parents should be included．（高分句型一）
    According to the survey，60% of the students think parents should be included because it is a rule everyone should obey．（高分句型二）Another 25% subscribe to the view that there is no need for a ban as their parents come to school to meet their children or the teachers and they couldn't be a danger to anyone．However，the rest think the guards can make a proper decision depending on certain situations．
    Personally，I agree with the first．As the saying goes，"Prevention is better than cure．"Proper measures should be taken before it's too late．As for parents，they have some other ways to keep in touch with their children，like making calls or asking for teachers'help．（高分句型三）All in all，campus security calls for everyone's concern and cooperation．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧