Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你校将于本周五上午举行题为“Protecting wild animals” 的英文演讲比赛，你将代表你班参赛，请你写一份演讲稿。内容主要包括：

1.野生动物的生存现状；

2.举例说明保护野生动物的重要性；

3.你是如何做的。

注意：词数100左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）。

Good morning,everyone!

I’m more than glad to stand here and give a short speech on protecting wild animals.

Answer 1

【答案】Good morning, everyone!I’m more than glad to stand here and give a short speech on protecting wild animals. As is known to us, a large number of wild animals have been killed for their meat, skins, etc. As a result, thousands of animals have either died out or become endangered.Actually, protecting wild animals benefits not only the animals themselves but also humans. For example, if farmers killed too many eagles, their corn and grain would be destroyed by rats. The reason is that with no eagles to hunt rats, their number would increase quickly.Therefore, all of us must do something to protect wild animals. As for me, I have joined an organization in our town whose aim is to call on people to protect wild animals and I have taken part in several activities.Let’s take action to protect wild animals now!

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。首先，学生要仔细阅读提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。其次，要注意提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。最后，要根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。本文要求以演讲稿的形式介绍野生动物的生存现状，保护野生动物的重要性以及自己的做法。首先确定文章的结构为三段式.第一段介绍野生动物的生存现状;第二段写保护野生动物的重要性;最后一段写自己的做法。文章可用现在时态描述。因为这个话题离学生生活比较远，学生写起来可能觉得无话可写。部分同学会出现内容空洞，写套话这样的问题。因此还是要多去关注这些热点话题，为作文多收集素材。

【亮点说明】这篇范文最大的特点就是行文非常连贯。里面运用了“as a result, for example, therefore, as for me”等承上启下的词语。此外，作者还运用了more than glad，As is known to us，非谓语动词（protecting wild animals），表语从句（that with no eagles to hunt rats, their number would increase quickly），定语从句（whose aim is to call on people to protect wild animals）等高级句式。作者在论述过程中，点面俱全，有理有据，非常符合一篇演讲稿的表达要求。