Question

3．当今，很多青少年拥有手机．一些青少年沉迷于玩手机，与身边的老师和同学缺乏正常的交流．针对这一现象，你打算为校报写一篇稿件．内容包括：
1．青少年使用手机的情况；
2．分析沉迷于玩手机带来的副作用；
3．针对这个现象提出建议．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可适当发挥，以使文章内容连贯．

Answer 1

分析 本篇为稿件．
写作要点为：1．青少年使用手机的情况；
2．分析沉迷于玩手机带来的副作用；
3．针对这个现象提出建议．

解答 Nowadays，most of us teenagers have our own cell phones and some of us are addicted to playing with cell phones．As a result，we ignore the normal communication with our teachers and classmates．
There is no doubt that cell phones have a negative impact on our life．Playing with cell phones makes it hard for us to concentrate on our lessons．Sending text messages makes us lose the ability to communicate with others．Worse still，we don't have much time for physical exercise．
So we'd better limit the time we spend using the cell phones．Besides，we should learn to communicate with our family members face to face，which helps build a harmonious family atmosphere．

点评 考生需了解写作要点及写作意图，仔细构思写作结构，平时注意积累词汇及语法知识．