题目内容
14.增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词的下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改1处,多者不计分.
3.不按规定的修改符号答题不能得分.
Dear Lucy,
I'm gladly to receive your letter.Thank you for your kind invite to your birthday party to be holding this Sunday.However,I regretted to tell you that I won't able to come.My grandma was ill.My parents are quite very busy these days,but I have to stay at home,helping with the houseworks.
I've bought a gift for your and our friend Linda will bring them to you.I do wish you a happy birthday.Yours,
Li Hua.
分析 本文主要讲述Lucy邀请李华参加她的生日聚会,但因要照看奶奶,只好买一件礼品托Linda带去,并祝他生日快乐.
解答 Dear Lucy,
I'm gladly to receive your letter.Thank you for your kind invite to your birthday party to be holding this Sunday.However,I regretted to tell you that I won't∧able to come.My grandma was ill.My parents are quite very busy these days,but I have to stay at home,helping with the houseworks.
I've bought a gift for your and our friend Linda will bring them to you.I do wish you a happy birthday.Yours,
Li Hua.
详解:
1.gladly改为glad 考查形容词.be动词后接形容词作表语,副词gladly的形容词是glad.
2.invite改为invitation 考查名词.kind是形容词,后接名词,动词invite的名词是invitation.
3.holding改为held 考查过去分词.party与hold之间是动宾关系,用动词不定式短语to be held this Sunday作定语修饰party.
4.regretted改为regret 考查动词时态.全文讲述的是现在的事情,要用一般现在时态.
5.加be 考查词语用法.根据句子结构,句中缺少谓语动词,be able to意为"能,会",与won't构成一般将来时态.
6.去掉very 考查副词.quite与very都意为"非常",但quite的语气程度比very强,两个不能同时使用,要去掉very.
7.but改为and 考查连词.前后两个单句表示并列关系,而非转折关系,用and.
8.houseworks改为housework 考查名词.housework是不可数名词,没有复数形式.
9.your改为you 考查代词.介词for后接宾格代词you,而不是形容词性物主代词your.
10.them改为it 考查代词.it指代上文提到的gift.
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.