题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Frnank及想学习太极。最近恰巧你校在网上直播太极课程。请给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.发出邀请;
2.介绍课程(上课方式、时间及授课人等);
3.期待相见。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
【答案】Dear Frnank,
Learning from your email that you are interested in Tai Ji and desire to learn it, I am rather delighted to invite you to participate in our online Tai Ji course.
As is known to all, COVID-19 epidemic is so serious that we should study online. Tai Ji is such a kind of online course that can ease students stress and strengthen their body. The course is held in DingDing App which you should download by yourself. It begins at 13:00 pm from Monday to Wednesday, which lasts about half an hour. What’s more, Mr Wu is our coach, who is famous for his Chinese Kongfu. Seeing is believing. With so many sports activities for you to choose from, I am sure Tai Ji must be the best choice.
Because of COVID-19 epidemic, we haven’t seen each other for a long time. Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件,针对你的英国朋友Frnank及想学习太极一事给与答复。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:一般现在时
结构:三段式。
第一段:提出写信目的并发出邀请;
第二段:介绍课程(上课方式、时间及授课人等);
第三段:期待相见。
要求:1.写信目的(know that Frnank want to learn Tai Ji and send an invitation)
2.介绍课程(when to have course\how to have course\who teach this course)
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
desire to, COVID-19 epidemic, online course, download,be famous for, chose from, look forward to, what’s more,
第三步:连词成句
1. I am rather delighted to invite you to participate in our online Tai Ji course.
2. Tai Ji is such a kind of online course that can ease students stress and strenghen their body.
3. It begins at 13:00 pm from Monday to Wednesday, which lasts about half an hour.
4. Mr Wu is our coach, who is famous for his Chinese Kongfu.
5. With so many sports activities for you to choose from, I am sure Tai Ji must be the best choice.
6. Looking forward to seeing you soon.
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步:润色修改