Question

【题目】俗话说：“国有国法，家有家规。”为了使子女身心健康、顺利成长，使家庭成员之间的关系更融洽、更和谐，每个家庭都会有这样或那样的家庭规矩。比如：必须按时回家，不准打电子游戏等。请你结合家庭的实际情况，根据下面的提示和要求，以“My Family Rules”为题，写一篇短文，内容包括：

1、家里有哪些家规；2、对家规的感受；3、对父母的建议。

注意：1、词数100字左右；

2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

My Family Rules

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Answer 1

【答案】

My Family Rules

My parents are very strict with me, and they have made some basic rules which I must obey. Firstly, I must finish my homework in time. Secondly, I cannot play computer games, even in my free time or on weekends. Thirdly, I have to do some chores, such as making the bed and tidying my bedroom and so on. If I break one of them, I will be punished. Thanks to these rules, I can live a healthy and regular life.

However, I think the second rule is unfair to me. I hope sometimes I could be allowed to play computer games for a while, it will make me relaxed.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，要求写一篇介绍自己家庭规则的短文，特别是要注意要求中的三点提示。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在时态，这方面需要注意的问题比较少。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。

【亮点说明】

在对于诸如此类文章的写作，要善于使用不同的句型。英语的写作过程中切忌使用重复的表达，对于不会表达的意思要学会替换。学生在写作时也要注意用平时在课本中或是阅读中积累的单词句型来自如的表达自己的意思，本文运用了be strict with, chores, thanks to, live a healthy and regular life, be unfair to等短语和单词。本文也有很多句型值得学习，如非限制性定语从句and they have made some basic rules which I must obey. ；If I break one of them, I will be punished.运用了条件状语从句，这样文章才能写出新意。文中使用合适的连接词把各要点联系成文，如firstly, secondly, however等。