Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要同学之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处）不计分。

Dear Mr. Johnson,

I’ve learned from a newspaper that some clerks are wanting in your company. I am eager to being one of them. So I am writing the letter. My name is zhang Hua. I was born in the Hebei Province and I am in good health. I’ve just graduated in the Computer Department of Wuhan University. I did very good in all subjects and I am especial good at computer studies and English. I can read science books in English and doing some writing in English as well. Beside, I know a little French. And in my spare time ,I enjoy playing basketball. As is said that your company is very famous and I’ll very glad if you let me work for it. My telephone number is 027-89276628．I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】wanting改为wanted.

【2】being改为be.

【3】in改为from.

【4】good改为well

【5】especial改为especially.

【6】doing改为do.

【7】Beside改为Besides.

【8】As改为It.

【9】加be.

【解析】

试题分析：短文改错题。

【1】wanting改为wanted；I’ve learned from a newspaper that some clerks are wanting in your company.句意：我从报纸上得知贵公司想要一些职员。换句话来讲，一些职员被贵公司所需求，所以wanting改为wanted表达被动语态，此时语气更加委婉，故wanting改为wanted。

【2】being改为be；be eager to do…渴望做……，故being改为be。

【3】in改为from；从……毕业应该是：graduate from…而不是graduate in…故from改为in。

【4】good改为well；Do well in =be good at…擅长……。故good 改为well。

【5】especial改为especially。Especial特别的，在此修饰动词词组be good at…只有副词才能修饰动词，especial的副词是especially，故especial改为especially。

【6】doing改为do；can后面跟动词原形，故doing改为do。

【7】Beside改为Besides；beside译为在……旁边；besides译为除了，还有；作者想表达的是：除此之外，我还会一点法语。故Beside改为Besides。

【8】As改为It。It is said that…据说……，是固定用法，故As改为It。

【9】加be；I’ll very glad if you let me work for it.此句缺少谓语动词，will后面跟动词原形，glad是一个形容词，所以要用be动词充当谓语动词，故加be。