Question

假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有

10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。

2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

Have you ever heard the saying: All work and no play make Jack a dull boy? What this means is that if you study all the times you will become a boring person. You must go out and have a fun with your friends, otherwise you will lose him. No one wants to be friends with someone only talked about work and study.

Perhaps you have a confident problem. Please try to remember that you do is just for yourself rather than no one else, but do not compete with your classmates. No one can be happier in studying seven days and seven nights in a week.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 from —of/about

 make—makes

 times—time

 fun前面去掉a

 him—them

 talked—talking

 confident –confidence

 that改成what

 but改成and

 happier—happy

【解析】

试题分析：

 from改成of 或about， hear of 听到，听说。

 make改成 makes   All work and no play做主语，是一件事，谓语动词用单数

 times改成time  固定词组：all the time  总是

 fun是不可数名词，have fun是玩的愉快。

 him改成them  上文提到的是friends  所以后面指代的时候要用them

 talked—talking，talking是定语修饰someone，

 confident –confidence， 句意：可能你有自信的问题。a confidence problem自信问题

 what you do是主语从句，主语从句中do后面没有宾语，用what连接，that在主语从句中不做成分。

 “不要与同学竞争“和”前面的你做的事情都是为了自己“是并列关系。

 happier改成happy   上下文中没有比较的意思

考点：考查短文改错