Question

根据下列提示写一篇日记, 记录下你一天的活动和感受。

上周四和周五年级组织了本期的第一次考试。你考得不好，心情郁闷。

星期五晚上几个同学邀你去KTV唱歌，那天晚上你们玩得十分开心，增强了自信，你知道了：失败是成功之母，并有了今后的打算。

注意：

1. 词数：100左右

2. 日记必须包括所有要点，但不要逐句翻译，可以增加细节，使短文完整。

3. 日记的开头已写好。

参考词汇： microphone 麦克风

Friday Nov. 26, 2010                                   Sunny

On Thursday and Friday last week our grade organized a test. That evening I went to the KTV with a few classmates.

                                                                            

                                                                            

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Friday Nov. 26, 2010                                  Sunny

On Thursday and Friday last week our grade organized a test. That evening I went to the KTV with a few classmates.

It was the first test this term in our grade. I was in a bad mood after the test because I didn’t do well in the test, especially in English. At the KTV, everybody was in high spirits. Each sang his favorite songs. At the beginning, I was only one of the audience, listening to their songs. After a while, I joined them, picked up the microphone and sang my favorite songs. Some were singing while others were dancing. We had a wonderful time. Soon I forgot my worry.

I have become cheerful now. Above all I’ve gained self-confidence. Failure is the mother of success. I shouldn’t lose heart just because of one or two failures. I still have many chances to try.

【解析】本文是一篇日记，考生在审题时一定要注意时态，应该使用一般现在时。日记的要点基本上都已经给出了，考生只需要按照时间的顺序翻译成英语即可。在写作的过程中需要注意使用合适的时间顺序的连接词，让文章成为一个有序的整体，也要注意使用高级的词汇和高级的句型，让文章更有特点。在最后一段可以适当的作一些发挥。