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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I have just got some good news to tell you. I win a national prize for my painting last week. My father was so pleasing that he suggested I went to England for a holiday this summer. I’d like stay here for half a month, visiting some places of interest and practise my English as well. We have kept in touch each other for nearly a year now. I have often dreamed of talking face to face with you. I hope you’ll be on the holiday at that time, but I’m sure we will have a lot to talk about. I also want to buy some souvenir for my friends at home. If I have any better ideas, please share them with me.

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Last year, I was lucky enough to work at an office near my mother’s house._________, I stayed with her for a month. During that time, I _________ her out with the housework and contributed to the groceries.

After a week, I started to _________ the groceries were running out pretty quickly.___________, I began observing my mother’s daily routine for two weeks. To my _________, I found she would pack a paper bag full of canned goods and _________every morning at about nine. She took the food to the slums(贫民窟) and distributed it to street _________.

I asked around and _________ my mum was popular in the area. The kids looked up to her as if she were their own mother. Then it hit me ——why didn’t she want to tell me about what she’d been doing? Was she _________ that I would stop buying the groceries if I knew the truth?

When she got home, I told her about my discovery and __________ she could react, I gave her a big hug and told her she didn’t need to keep it a __________ from me. She told me that __________ of the children lived with an old lady in a makeshift home while others____________on the streets. For years, my mum had been helping out by __________ whatever food she could __________. I was so moved by how __________ she was. She used what was__________for her to help others in need. And I was so __________ of her.

I __________ to buy groceries for my mum. But now, I always add a(n)__________bag for her other children.

1.A. However B. Besides C. Therefore D. Otherwise

2.A. slowed B. helped C. sent D. pushed

3.A. ignore B. understand C. complain D. notice

4.A. Confused B. Embarrassed C. Moved D. Annoyed

5.A. delight B. relief C. surprise D. regret

6.A. work out B. head out C. clean up D. get up

7.A. children B. strangers C. passers-by D. artists

8.A. made sure B. let out C. pointed out D. found out

9.A. angry B. hopeless C. worried D. frightened

10.A. once B. before C. until D. after

11.A. secret B. surprise C. gift D. reminder

12.A. few B. all C. any D. some

13.A. lay B. ate C. slept D. played

14.A. giving B. collecting C. receiving D. selling

15.A. lend B. spare C. find D. bring

16.A. curious B. cautious C. fearless D. selfless

17.A. meant B. cooked C. borrowed D. produced

18.A. tired B. fond C. scared D. proud

19.A. refuse B. long C. continue D. agree

20.A. large B. extra C. beautiful D. empty

Bali(巴厘岛） is an Indonesia island that is rich in indigenous （本土的） culture．A lot of people say that Balinese culture is unique and that the people of Bali have always been contented with the “now”．If you ask a Balinese person what heaven is like, the probable answer will be "just like Bali"．This only goes to show that most Balinese people are happy to be where they are and never worry．

One factor that contributes to this laid-back lifestyle is the culture of close family ties in Bali．In the Balinese culture, support is always available．Balinese extended families are so tightly knit that all members usually reside in the same complex．

Hinduism(印度教）is one of the main religions in Bali.The Balinese culture is based on a form of this religion, which is called “Hindu Dharma”．This religion reached the island during the eleventh century．Most of the family customs and traditions as well as community lifestyles of the Balinese people are influenced by this．The religious influence even expands widely into the arts, which makes Bali distinct(不同于） from the rest of Indonesia．

In spite of the fact that tourists flood to the island every year, the Balinese people have managed to conserve their culture．Almost every native of Bali is an artist in some form or another．Parents and villagers have passed on their skills to their children, who all seem to have inclinations （意愿） either to music, dance, painting, and decor．

Another remarkable mark of the Balinese culture is the series of ceremonies and rituals（仪式） known as the Manusa Yadnya．This marks the different stages of Balinese life．Cremation （火葬） is very popular on this island，and unlike in the West, death is a joyous and colorful event for the Balinese．

1.What do we know about the Balinese according to the first two paragraphs?

A. They lead a very relaxing but unhealthy life．

B. They live in large families and are close to each other．

C. Their family members are distributed in different places．

D. Their extended families live too close together to get along well．

2.The underlined word “conserve” in Para．4 can be best replaced by “____”．

A. preserve B. spread C. Form D. expand

3.What is the text mainly about?

A. The Balinese religion． B. The lifestyle of Balinese．

C. Balinese culture． D. The tourism in Bali.

The world is filled with smart, talented, educated and gifted people. We meet them every day. A few days ago, my car was not running well. I pulled it into a garage and the young mechanic had it fixed in just a few minutes. He knew what was wrong by simply listening to the engine. I was amazed. The sad truth is, great talent is not enough.

I am constantly shocked at how little talented people earn. I heard the other day that less than 5 percent of Americans earn more than $100, 000 a year. A business consultant who specializes in the medical trade was telling me how many doctors and dentists struggle financially. It was this business consultant who gave me the phrase, "They are one skill away from great wealth."

There is an old saying that goes, "Job means "just over broke (破产)" ". And unfortunately, I would say that the saying applies to millions of people. Because school does not think financial intelligence is intelligence, most workers "live within their means". They work and they pay the bills. Instead I recommend to young people to seek work for what they will learn, more than what they will earn.

When I ask the classes I teach, "How many of you can cook a better hamburger than McDonald’s?” almost all the students raise their hands. I then ask, "So if most of you can cook a better hamburger, how come McDonald’s makes more money than you?" The answer is obvious: McDonald’s is excellent at business systems. The reason so many talented people are poor is because they focus on bui1ding a better hamburger and know little or nothing about business systems. The world is filled with talented poor people. They focus on perfecting their skills at building a better hamburger rather than the skills of selling and delivering the hamburger.

1.The author mentions the mechanic in the first paragraph to show that ________.

A. he has a sharp sense of hearing B. he is ready to help others

C. he is just one of the talented people D. he knows little about car repairing

2.The underlined part in the third paragraph can be best replaced by “________”.

A. spend more than they can afford B. do in their own way

C. live in their own circle D. live within what they earn

3.Why do talented people earn so little according to the author?

A. They lack financial intelligence.

B. They don’t work hard enough.

C. They don’t make full use of their talents.

D. They have no specialized skills.

4.The main purpose of the author is to tell us ________.

A. how young people can find a satisfactory job

B. what schools should teach students

C. how McDonald’s makes much money

D. why so many talented people are poor

In an effort to discourage people from using plastics，scientists have been hard at work inventing alternative packaging products．From water bottles made from seaweed to cutlery(餐具) made from rice and wheat，a number of inventions are set to change the way we eat while we are on the go，or having a relaxing picnic in the park．

The idea of using seaweed to make eco-friendly(环保的) water bottles has been around for a few years．Recently，Ari Jonsson took his invention—a water bottle made from red seaweed—to show off at a festival. The bottles will only hold their shape as long as they are filled．As soon as these bottles are empty they will begin to break down，though they would be perfectly safe to eat．Ari Jonsson’s bottles are a step closer to a widely used alternative to the current plastic ones．

The eatable water container is not the only product to add to our image of the future．Narayana Pessapaty has also created eatable spoons．After the success of his spoons, Mr Pessapaty is ready to expand and introduce forks and chopsticks to his menu．His aim is to largely reduce the amount of plastic waste，which is a huge problem for waste sites all over the world．It is a product that may take up to 500 years to break down，and recycling companies worldwide are struggling to deal with it．

Aside from the obvious benefits to the environment，this new packaging is also cheap to produce and therefore cheap to buy．Even better is the fact that similar eatable cutlery can be made at home，possibly a science project for children or just fun with friends．Why not get experimenting and create your own recipes?

1.Why do scientists invent alternative packaging products?

A. To make people’s life more convenient．

B. To reduce the amount of plastic waste．

C. To charge the way we picnic outside．

D. To show off their inventive talents．

2.What makes Ari Jonsson’s water bottles eco-friendly?

A. They can be made at home．

B. They are cheap to produce and buy．

C. They will hold their shape when they are filled．

D. They will break down themselves when empty．

3.What do Ari and Narayana’s inventions have in common?

A. They are convenient to carry． B. They are safe to eat．

C. They can be used for a short time． D. They are heavier than plastics．

4.What can be inferred from this passage?

A. Home-made eatable cutlery is likely to be popular．

B. Eatable cutlery’will completely replace plastics in the near future．

C. No recycling companies can breakdown plastic waste．

D. It’s unsafe for individuals to invent eatable cutlery at home．

Anvitha Vijay has built two educational apps and is at work on a third. She aims to use her skills to help others.

Need an app for that? Anvitha Vijay, 9, can build it. With the help of YouTube videos, the young techie from Melbourne, Australia, learned to code at age 7. Soon, she was trying her hand at making apps.

“When I first got my iPad, I was fascinated by all the apps on it,” she told TFK. “It wasn’t long before I wanted to create my own.”

She built her first two apps with her younger sister in mind. Smartkins Animals helps children identify more than 100 animals and their sounds. Smartkins Rainbow Colors teaches kids colors. Each app has been downloaded thousands of times.

Anvitha’s skills won her a scholarship to attend a big tech conference hosted by Apple in San Francisco, California. There, she got applicable tips from the pros. She went to workshops where she learned about the latest software for app building. All that training led to an idea for a third app. This one, called GoalsHi, inspires kids to practice good habits. Users are rewarded for achieving goals, such as eating their vegetables or practicing piano. Anvitha says the rewards are like getting a sticker for a job well done. “Kids can set goals with this app and get stars when they achieve them,” she says. “The idea is to empower and motivate kids to achieve one little step a day.”

Anvitha’s goal is to continue creating technology that helps kids learn while having fun. But even more important to her is that the world sees the power of technology in kids’ hands. “The more training we get in tech at an early age,” she says, “the better chance we have of becoming innovation champions who will one day change the world.”

1.What can we know about Anvitha?

A. She made her first app at 7.

B. She first learned about apps through her iPad.

C. She made a speech at the conference in California.

D. She used her scholarship to try making her third app.

2.What’s the function of GoalsHi?

A. To help kids identify colors.

B. To help kids recognize animals.

C. To inspire kids to achieve all goals.

D. To motivate kids to form good habits.

3.Why does Anvitha try to make apps?

A. To win a scholarship.

B. To help children have fun.

C. To help kids and in turn change the world.

D. To show her talent and skills of technology.

根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。

Palm oil(棕榈油) is the most widely used vegetable oil worldwide．It’s found in a wide variety of products from of vitamins to chocolate and bread．1. The former makes it easy to spread，while the latter makes it good for our body．

But the oil’s popularity comes at a high price．2. As a result，thousands of acres of rainforests in Indonesia，the world’s biggest palm oil producers，are being destroyed to make room for them．

With half of the world’s palm oil coming from Indonesia，orangutans(猩猩) have suffered a lot．3. What’s worse，in 2015，wildfires endangered one-third of the remaining orangutans．Palm oil farms have also threatened tigers and elephants and caused water and air pollution．

4. However，it’s not easy given that no other natural vegetable oil has both of its qualities．Now，scientists are creating a new oil to replace it by using food waste and M．pulcherrima，a yeast(酵母) that grows on leaves，fruits and flowers．5. Besides, the yeast can be widely produced in any weather．The scientists say their biggest challenge was to find a cheap way to change the sugars in the food waste to a form that the yeast can take in easily．The team is now trying to test if they can produce the oil at a lower cost．

A．Palm trees need lots of land to grow．

B．The easiest solution is to stop using palm oil so widely．

C．The palm oil is so expensive that many families can’t afford it．

D．In the last 20 years，over 80% of their habitat has been destroyed．

E．There are many things we can do to protect the endangered wild animals．

F．The oil is popular because it has a high melting point and contains healthy fats．

G．It eats the sugars from the waste and turns it into thick oil that has similar qualities to palm oil．

How to make a successful apology. Have you done something that you feel bad about? Is there a person who you have treated badly? Do you need to say “I’m sorry” to someone? Here are five things you can do to have a successful apology.

● Make your apology real. 1.People can tell if you take responsibility for what you did or if you are lying.

● Do not make excuses. 2.It is saying that you were wrong to do it.

● 3. An apology should show that you have learned from what you did. Show that you mean what you say.

● Make it clear that you are apologizing. Just saying “I’m sorry” is not enough. Talk about what you did and then say that you feel bad about doing it. 4.

● Be prepared for the unexpected. Be prepared for it to take some time for your apology to be accepted. This may be a long moment, a few minutes, or even days or weeks. The person may stay angry with you. 5.

A. Be patient and hopeful.

B. Make a promise to change.

C. Choose the right time to apologize.

D. An apology will be better accepted if it is sincere.

E. An apology is not explaining why you did something.

F. You can give your apology to the other person as a letter.

G. It is important that the person knows you are apologizing.

假如你是李华，你的美国网友Mike即将随父母到中国，并在中国度过中秋节。他发email向你询问有关中秋节的习俗，请你回信告诉他。要点如下：

历史悠久；

中国的传统节日；

家庭团聚；

共进晚餐；

吃月饼，月饼象征团圆（unity）；

赏月。

注意： 1．词数100左右；. 可适当增加细节。

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