Question

【题目】请根据以下提示，并结合具体事例，用英语写一篇短文。

Small things make a big difference. The small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society.

注意：1.无须写标题；

2.内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例；

3.词数不少于100，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。

Answer 1

【答案】

It isn’t hard to grow up into a responsible member of society.

I can well remember an incident that happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon. I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car, which drove off quickly. A man immediately rushed to the girl to give her first aid and I joined in without hesitation. Luckily she was not badly injured and we sent her to the nearest hospital. Compared with the escaped driver, I am proud of what I did.

As a member of the society, I am aware that being responsible is what it takes to make a better society.

【解析】

试题分析:本篇书面表达属于记叙文，根据一句话来写small things对我们生活产生的巨大影响。写作时注意以下几点：1、弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确写作要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行构思。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照总——分——总进行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般过去时。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如It isn’t hard to grow up into a responsible member of society. It作形式主语。I can well remember an incident that happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon.定语从句。when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car, which drove off quickly.时间状语从句。Compared with the escaped driver, I am proud of what I did.独立主格结构。I am aware that being responsible is what it takes to make a better society固定句型，it takes to。.此外，文章还使用了大量短语knocked down、joined in without hesitation.等，使语言更加连贯。