Question

11．假设你是李华，5月1日你和同学参观了北京大学．请根据下图，用英语写一篇日记．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头已给出，不计入总词数．

May 1                Monday                  Fine
It's a fine day today and
we paid a visit to Beijing University．Early in the morning，we arrived at the gate where a professor gave us a warm welcome．We were then shown around．
We first went to the library with a large collection of books，where we saw students reading attentively．Next students sitting under trees，studying，which made a beautiful picture．At about 4 in the afternoon．We attended a lecture on science given by a famous professor．Before we knew it，it was time to say goodbye．
Now sitting at the table I feel very excited．I will make every effort to go to college．．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
Early in the morning，we arrived at the gate where a professor gave us a warm welcome
清晨，我们来到了一个教授给了我们热烈的欢迎之门．
高分句型二：
We first went to the library with a large collection of books，where we saw students reading attentively．
我们先去一个大的藏书的图书馆，在那里我们看到了学生正在细读．

解答 May 1 Monday                                                                         Fine
It's a fine day today and we paid a visit to Beijing University．Early in the morning，we arrived at the gate where a professor gave us a warm welcome（高分句型一）．We were then shown around．
We first went to the library with a large collection of books，where we saw students reading attentively（高分句型二）．Next students sitting under trees，studying，which made a beautiful picture．At about 4 in the afternoon．We attended a lecture on science given by a famous professor．Before we knew it，it was time to say goodbye．
Now sitting at the table I feel very excited．I will make every effort to go to college．

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．