Question

20．假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter写信询问中国目前火爆的共享单车（bicycles sharing）是怎么回事，请您根据要求写一封回信，向他简单介绍一下．内容要点包括：
1．下载APP，通过手机扫描二维码（scan QR code），付费使用；
2．路边停放即可，非常方便．但有时也出现乱停乱放现彖；
3．你的观点．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Peter，
I am glad to hear from you．I'm writing to tell you more about the new form of bicycles sharing mentioned in your latest letter．
It's very convenient to use if you have a smartphone．What you do is to find a nearest mobike through the APP，scan the QR code on the bike，and enjoy your trip（高分句型一）．
Compared to other forms of sharing bike，the greatest advantage of mobike is that you can easily find one and never worry about where to park it．It is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation，which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well（高分句型二）．However，some mobikes are parked improperly by people．I hope it will be avoided as soon as possible after measures are taken．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
What you do is to find a nearest mobike through the APP，scan the QR code on the bike，and enjoy your trip
你要做的是通过APP找到最近MOBIKE、扫描QR码在自行车上，享受您的旅行．
高分句型二：
It is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation，which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well．
它正成为一种新的趋势，作为一种交通工具，从而缓解交通压力，有利于环境．

解答 Dear Peter，
      I am glad to hear from you．I'm writing to tell you more about the new form of bicycles sharing mentioned in your latest letter．
      It's very convenient to use if you have a smartphone．What you do is to find a nearest mobike through the APP，scan the QR code on the bike，and enjoy your trip（高分句型一）．
      Compared to other forms of sharing bike，the greatest advantage of mobike is that you can easily find one and never worry about where to park it．It is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation，which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well（高分句型二）．However，some mobikes are parked improperly by people．I hope it will be avoided as soon as possible after measures are taken．
                                                                                                                               Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                      Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．