Question

【题目】下面是你今天前往机场接一位朋友的经历。请根据汉语提示写一篇100词左右的英语日记。

要点提示：

1.下午2:00离开家，朋友的飞机是3:40到；

2.由于遇到沙尘暴，能见度降低,在环城路上遭遇堵车，耽误了20分钟；

3.在3:30赶到机场，接到朋友。

参考词汇： 1. 能见度visibility 2.降低decrease(v.) 3. 环城路 the ring road

Saturday, March 16 Fine

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Saturday, March16

Fine

I drove away from home at 2:00 p.m. to meet my friend at the airport,

whose plane was arriving at 3:40 p.m. Unluckily, when I was on the way, I was caught in a sudden sandstorm. Since the visibility was decreased greatly, drivers couldn’t see the road clearly and I was stuck in a traffic jam on the ring road. I was very worried and twenty minutes later, the condition returned to normal and I hurried to the airport as soon as possible. At last, I arrived at the airport and picked up my friend.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇文章要求写一篇日记，根据提示信息来写。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本篇可以按照时间顺序来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般过去时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。to meet my friend at the airport,whose plane was arriving at 3:40 p.m.使用了定语从句。Since the visibility was decreased greatly使用了原因状语从句。本文还使用了大量短语，如drive away from, stuck in a traffic jam,hurried to, as soon as possible，插入语At last，以及副词Unluckily的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。