Question

假如你叫李华，看到同学中的很多独生子女在生活中存在下列现象，请你给报社编辑写一封信，希望他们给同学们些建议：

比较自私，难与同学相处；

不会关心他人，难理解父母；

遇事不会处理，过分依赖父母；

学习不努力，怕吃苦。

注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节；3.参考词汇——自私的 selfish

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor,

I write to tell you some problems existing in some only-child students. Because the only-child families usually try every effort to give their children what they want and satisfy all their desires，these only-child students then become a little selfish，making them difficult to get along well with their classmates. What’s more，there exists the generation gap between students and parents. Some students are self-centered and can’t understand their parents.

In addition，some parents spoil their children by doing everything for them. Therefore， they depend on their parents too much and can’t deal with difficult situation. Owing to these，some students have become lazy and would rather not study hard.

I’m concerned about the situation. Could you please give some advice to help them get over these bad habits？

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲类作文。我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。