Question

书面表达（满分25分）
进入高三以后，大多数同学觉得学习压力大，时间紧，就不再花费时间进行体育锻炼了。很多同学因此体质下降。假如你叫李华，发现同学李明最近总是生病，决定给他写一封信，告诉他体育锻炼的益处和缺乏锻炼可能出现的问题。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Li Ming,
I am sorry to hear that you have been ill for days and hope you are better now.
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With best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

One Possible Version:
Dear Li Ming,
I am sorry to hear that you have been ill for days and hope you are better now. You have studied so hard that you have had no time for exercise, which is harmful to your health. I feel it would be more beneficial to your health if you could take more exercise in future.
Taking exercise can improve your physical health and refresh your mind. After one or two hours of exercise you can study better. Only when you have a strong body can you keep on studying without feeling tired. Otherwise your study will be interrupted from time to time by the sickness.
Exercise is as useful and important as your study. I hope you can take at least one hour’s exercise every day after you are recovered.
With best wishes!
Yours truly,
Li Hua

解析这篇书面表达是就进入高三以后，大多数同学觉得学习压力大，时间紧，就不再花费时间进行体育锻炼，很多同学因此体质下降的问题进行阐述，第一段写现象和解决办法，第二段写锻炼的好处。写作时要注意句型的运用：如：You have studied so hard that you have had no time for exercise, which is harmful to your health.这句话里用了：so…that…句型，还有which引导的非限制性定语从句。Only when you have a strong body can you keep on studying without feeling tired.这句话里用了倒装句。