Question

1．假定你是李华，每当听到"常回家看看"这首歌时，你都非常感动．向父母表达爱的方式有很多种，请你根据以下要点，写一篇演讲稿号召同学们都要尊敬父母．
提示：1．经常帮助父母做一些力所能及的家务活；
      2．经常关心父母的生活和身体健康状况；
      3．在父母生日时表达祝愿，让他们知道我们的爱．
注意：1．词数100左右；   2．可以适当发挥以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾部分已写好，不计入总词数．
My dear fellows，
   Today I'd like to talk about love to our parents．
Many people are moved by the song Going home often when they hear it，including me．As a middle schoolstudent，I think we should respect/look up to our parents．
As far as I am concerned，there are many differentways to express love to our parents． First，we should often help our parents to do as much housework aswe can． Second，we have the duty to care forthe condition of their life and health． Besides，it's important to remember their birthdays，and expressing our wishes tothem is a good way of showing our deep love．
No matter what we do，remember showing respect toour parents is one of the Chinese traditional moral values．
Thank you!   Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，写一篇演讲稿，号召同学们都要尊敬父母．
写作要点包括：1．经常帮助父母做一些力所能及的家务活； 2．经常关心父母的生活和身体健康状况； 3．在父母生日时表达祝愿，让他们知道我们的爱．
人称以第一人称为主．时态以一般现在时为主．
重要短语：talkabout （谈论），look up to （尊敬），the ways to do sth （做某事的方法），As far as I am concerned （就某人所关注的而言），care for （关心），a good way of doing （做某事的好方法），show respect to…（对…尊敬）．
【高分句型】
1．…and expressing our wishes to them is a good way of showing our deep love．
这里是动名词作主语，expressing our wishes to them作主语，is是谓语动词．a good way of showing our deep love是表语．

2．No matter what we do，remember showing respect to our parents is one of the Chinese traditional moral values．
这里是No matter what引导的让步状语从句，remember showing respect to our parents is one of the Chinese traditional moral values．是主句．主句中又含宾语从句，从句中showing respect to our parents是主语，is是谓语动词，one of the Chinese traditional moral values是表语．

解答 Mydear fellows，
         Today I'dlike to talk about love to/for our parents．Many peopleare moved by the song Going home often when they hear it，includingme． As a middle schoolstudent，I think we should respect/look up to our parents．（开头）
As far as I am concerned，there are many differentways to express love to our parents． First，we should often help our parents to do as much housework aswe can．（经常帮助父母做一些力所能及的家务活） Second，we have the duty to care forthe condition of their life and health．（经常关心父母的生活和身体健康状况） Besides，it's important to remember their birthdays，and expressing our wishes tothem is a good way of showing our deep love．【高分句型】（在父母生日时表达祝愿，让他们知道我们的爱）
No matter what we do，remember showing respect to our parents is one of the Chinesetraditional moral values．【高分句型】（结尾）
Thank you!

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点，并适当增加细节．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．