题目内容
【题目】我校校报Superview需要一些介绍中国著名省市的稿件。请根据以下提示,用英语写一篇介绍云南省的短文,并投稿。
地名 | 云南省(南部美丽的云彩) |
位置 | 最云南的省份 |
面积 | 393,000平方公里 |
民族 | 拥有25个少数民族 |
地理特征 | 拥有高山,湖泊和热带雨林 |
稀有动物 | 被誉为“动物王国”,有金丝猴,亚洲象等 |
植物 | “世界花园”,拥有世界上一半的植物物种 |
自然奇观 | 石林、虎跳峡等 |
要求:1.可适当填加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.词数100词左右。
参考词汇:石林Stone Forest 虎跳峡Tiger Leaping Gorge 物种species
热带雨林rainforest 少数民族ethnic minority
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【答案】Located in the most southwest of China,Yunnan province enjoys a popular name,beautiful clouds in the south. Covering an area of 394,000 square kilometers,it's the most diverse region of China with 25 ethnic minorities.
Yunnan has its unique geographical features,which includes everything from mountains and lakes to rainforests. Because of this special geographical environment,Yunnan is also home to half of the world's plant species and rare animals,such as golden monkeys and Asian elephants and so on.Therefore,Yunnan is well-known as "world garden" and "kingdom of animals".As a land of natural beauty and mystery,Yunnan is also well-known for its breath-taking natural wonders,such as Stone Forest,Tiger Leaping Gorge,which attract numerous tourists every year.
Yunnan is open to the world now.It warmly welcomes all friends to visit it.
【解析】本文是写一篇命题作文,写作主题为介绍云南省的一些特色。在写作时应注意要符合主题,通篇以一般现在时为主;表格中所给出的要点要齐全,并且使用适当的连接词,使上下文行文流畅;行文思路要有逻辑性,条例清晰。在句型方面,学生可以采用简单句与复合句结合的方法,并且同时尽量避免多次使用相同的单词与词组,使内容更加的充实。
【范文亮点】
文章以“Located in the most southwest of China”首先介绍了云南省的位置,然后引出云南省的位置,面积和民族。第二段又以“Yunnan has its unique geographical features”作为总结引出下文云南独特的地理特色及丰富的物种特色,使得文章结构更加紧凑。此外文章还运用了定语从句,举例等句型,使得文章整体写作水平提高。
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