Question

7．假设你是李华，一名大学一年级学生，本来计划暑假到美国一个家庭体验美国文化，现在因故暂时取消，请你给本来计划入住的Smith一家主人Mr．Smith写一封信．需表达以下内容：
1．因故取消原因；2．将来游学安排；3．表达歉意．
注意：1．词数100左右；2．短文中不能出现本人相关信息；3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Mr．Smith，
I am writing to tell you an important changeabout my summer vocation schedule which I have been longing for for a long time．I am really so sorry but I have to abandon this opportunity due to some unexpected arrangement from my college．
The reason why I have to change my summer schedule is that my college has arranged for a group of students to help some poor students in a remote village．Unfortunately，I am one of them．I hope my summer schedule change won't bring you much disturbance．Will this winter vocation be appropriate for me to carry on my American culture tour？So excited I am when I imagine that I can experience a different Spring Festival from my home town!
Again，sorry for the schedule change and inconvenience．I am looking forward to your reply soon．
Your sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是给本来计划入住的Smith一家主人Mr．Smith写的一封信．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一写明书信的目的并且表示歉意；二取消计划的原因和将来游学安排；三再次表达歉意．
高分句型：
1．The reason why I have to change my summer schedule is that my college has arranged for a group of students to help some poor students in a remote village．句子用了固定句式The reason why…is that…表示"某事的原因是…"；arrange for sb to do 表示"安排某人去做某事"．
我不得不改变暑假计划的原因是我们大学安排一些大学生去偏远山村帮助贫穷的学生．
2．So excited I am when I imagine that I can experience a different Spring Festival from my home town!句子里So excited I am 表示"我是如此兴奋"； that引导I imagine 的宾语从句．
当我想到我会度过一个和家乡不同的春节的时候，我是如此兴奋．

解答 Dear Mr．Smith，
   I am writing to tell you an important change about my summer vocation schedule which I have been longing for for a long time．I am really so sorry but I have to abandon this opportunity due to some unexpected arrangement from my college．（写明书信的目的并且表示歉意）
    The reason why I have to change my summer schedule is that my college has arranged for a group of students to help some poor students in a remote village．【高分句型一】Unfortunately，I am one of them．I hope my summer schedule change won't bring you much disturbance．Will this winter vocation be appropriate for me to carry on my American culture tour？So excited I am when I imagine that I can experience a different Spring Festival from my home town!【高分句型二】（取消计划的原因和将来游学安排）
   Again，sorry for the schedule change and inconvenience．I am looking forward to your reply soon．（再次表达歉意）
                                                                                                                  Your sincerely，
                                                                                                                         Li Hua

点评 考查提纲类作文．
这是一篇提纲作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少．