Question

10．前不久我国宣布将建无围墙小区，对此人们议论纷纷，请根据以下提示写一篇100字左右的短文．
赞成的人认为：1．缓解交通压力               2．…（自己给出一条理由）
反对的人认为：1．盗窃等犯罪行为可能会增加    2．…（自己给出一条理由）
你的看法是：…
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It is reported that future communities in towns and cities will be built without fences in our country，which arouses heated discussions．
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Answer 1

分析 这是一篇要点文．写作时，首先要写清要点，包括：赞同者的理由和自己的看法，反对者的理由和自己的看法，我的观点．其次，要以第一人称来表述．最后要注意时态以一般现在时态为主．
重点短语和句型：
arouse heated discussion 引发热烈讨论
in favor of 支持
harmonious life 和谐生活
on the contrary 相反
to some degree 在某种程度上
It is reported that future communities in towns and cities will be built without fences in our country，which arouses heated discussion．
it is reported that据报道，常用句型；句中which引导非限制性定语从句，修饰前面整个句子内容．
Some people are in favor of the policy，saying it will contribute to reducing traffic congestion in major cities and making transport faster than ever．
句中现在分词saying作伴随状语．
those who oppose the policy are desperately worried that more safety problems like theft and robbery will be growing．
句中who引导定语从句修饰those；that连接宾语从句．

解答 On Fenceless Communities
It is reported that future communities in towns and cities will be built without fences in our country，which arouses heated discussion．（高分句型一）（点明话题）
Some people are in favor of the policy，saying it will contribute to reducing traffic congestion in major cities and making transport faster than ever．（高分句型二）Besides，the new policy indicates that our country is following the international trend，saving natural and public resources and building residential zones without class differences．In this way，more room can be made for public uses．Thus，people can live a more convenient and harmonious life．（赞同者的看法和理由）
On the contrary，those who oppose the policy are desperately worried that more safety problems like theft and robbery will be growing．（高分句型三） What's more，people's privacy will be affected to some degree．（反对者的看法和理由）
Personally speaking，as the new policy is still under discussion，it remains to be seen whether it will have a positive or negative impact on society．（我的观点）

点评 书面表达题考查的是英语的应用能力．写作时要注意：要点的提炼要全；关键短语和句型要写对；过渡词和过渡短语要自然，通顺地道；最后还要注意人称和时态使用要正确．