Question

15．假设你是李华，你和学校外教Mr．Brown 约好周末去岳麓山玩，但你因故不能赴约．请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件：
1．表示歉意
2．解释原因
3．另约时间．
注意：1．词数100左右
      2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
      3．开关和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Mr．Brown，
I am Li Hua，your student in class 12        ．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一封电子邮件．写作时，首先要写清要点，包括：表达歉意，解释原因，另约时间．其次，要注意使用第一人称．最后还要注意时态，以一般过去时态和一般现在时态为主．
重点短语和句型：
further study 深造
pick sb up 接某人
spare some time 抽时间
allow sb to do sth 允许某人做某事
I am indeed very sorry that I can't go to Yuelu Mountain with you next week．
句中that连接宾语从句．
Just now，my cousin，Xiao Ming，who went to Australia for his further study last year，informed me that he would return next Saturday morning．
句中who引导非限制性定语从句修饰my cousin；that连接宾语从句．
I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation．
句中hope后接宾语从句．

解答 Dear Mr Brown，
I am Li Hua，your student in Class 12．I am indeed very sorry that I can't go to Yuelu Mountain with you next week．（高分句型一）I feel uneasy about it and want to tell you what happened．（表达歉意）
Just now，my cousin，Xiao Ming，who went to Australia for his further study last year，informed me that he would return next Saturday morning．（高分句型二） He wanted me to pick him up at the airport．You know，we haven't seen each other for nearly a year，so I can't spare the time to go out with you．（解释原因）
I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation．（高分句型三） I would appreciate your allowing me to make another date to go there and have fun together．（另约时间）
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 书面表达题考查的是英语的应用能力．写作时要注意：要点的提炼要全；关键短语和句型要写对；过渡词和过渡短语要自然，通顺地道；最后还要注意人称和时态使用要正确．