Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你校学生会将举办一年一度的“校园美食节”活动，请你作为学生会主席给外教Mr. Johnson写一封邮件，内容包括：

1. 邀请他参加；

2. 介绍美食节情况；

3. 期待回复。

注意：1. 词数100左右。

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3. 开头结尾已经写好，不计收入总词数。

Dear Mr. Johnson,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Johnson,

On behalf of the Student Union I would like to invite you to join us in The Delicious Food in School, which is held every year in our school.

The activity will be held from 9:00am to 3:00pm next Sunday in the square of our school. There will be much famous local food then, and you can have a taste of what you like. What's more, we have invited some people to show us how to made dumplings, zongzi, spring rolls and other traditional food, so you will have a chance to make the food with your own hands. I know that you are fond of our local food, so this will surely be a unique experience for you.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生代表学生会邀请外教Mr. Johnson参加“校园美食节”，并告知活动相关情况。

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主

结构：总分总

要求：

1. 邀请他参加；

2. 介绍美食节情况（时间，地点，内容等）；

3. 期待回复。

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

on behalf of/ would like to do sth./ annually/ local/ be fond of/ have a taste of/ unique/ look forward to

第三步：连词成句

1. On behalf of the Student Union I would like to invite you to join us in The Delicious Food in School, which is held every year in our school.

2. The activity will be held from 9:00am to 3:00pm next Sunday in the square of our school.

3. There will be much famous local food then, and you can have a taste of what you like.

4.What's more, we have invited some people to show us how to made dumplings, zongzi, spring rolls and other traditional food, so you will have a chance to make the food with your own hands.

5. I know that you are fond of our local food, so this will surely be a unique experience for you.

6. Looking forward to your reply.

第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）

表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…

状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…

定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…

第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）