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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除把多余的词用斜线\划掉。 修改在错的词下划一横线并在其下面写出修改后的词。 注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分。

Kate was always unhappy about her figure, but she didn’t know how to lose the weight. One day, she went to consulting a doctor. The doctor advised her to have a balancing diet and exercise more. So her parents were both busy earning their living and couldn’t provide Kate a healthy diet. She often ate fast food who contained too much fat. She knew she ought to eat more vegetables and fruit that were good for her healthy. Luckily, two weeks late, with the help of the doctor, Kate become thinner. He was very happy and became more confidence about herself.

Answer 1

【答案】1.去掉weight前的the

2. consulting→consult

3. balancing→balanced

4. So→But

5. a前加with

6. who→which

7. healthy→health

8. late→later

9. He→She

10. confidence→confident

【解析】1. 去掉the 考查固定搭配。lose weight“减肥”，固定短语，故去掉the。

2. consulting→consult 考查固定搭配。go to do为固定用法，故改为consult。

3. balancing→balanced 考查形容词。修饰名词diet用形容词balanced。

4. So→But 考查连词。上文凯特需要一个均衡的饮食，下文她的父母不能提供这样的饮食，是转折关系，故改为But。

5. a前加with 考查介词。provide sb with sth“给某人提供某物”，故加with。

6. 此处food是先行词，指物，在后面的定语从句中作主语，故把who改为which。

7. 句意：吃更多的蔬菜和水果对她的身体好。这里走介词的宾语，要用名词形式，故把healthy改为health。

8. 句意：两周之后。late表示“迟的”，later表示“后来的”，故把late改为later。

9. 根据上文可知，指Kate，是she，故把He改为She。

10. 句意：她变得更自信了。连系动词后面用形容词作表语，故把confidence改为confident。