Question

1．假如你是一名高三学生，最近你看了一则央视公益广告Family且深有感触．请用英语根据下面的图给你校英语报写一篇立志学习，感恩父母的文章，描述图片要表达的内容和意义并谈谈你的感受．
注意：不少于120词，开头已为你写好，不计入总词数．
As is vividly shown in the picture，the word family represents three people，who are father，mother and I．When I was young，father was the most important person in my family．My mother took good care of me and protected me from wind and rain．Later I grow up．I take on the responsibility to look after my parents．I realize that the family also means father and mother I love you．
The picture mirrors a common phenomenon，which has aroused our social concern．Undoubtedly，our parents have made a lot of sacrifices．It's high time that we took measures to show gratitude to them．What's more，we shouldn't take our parents'love for granted．Instead，we are supposed to appreciate it from the bottom of our hearts．From my point of view，we ought to show our affection to our beloved parents．Now it is time for us to do what we can in return for their hard work．What we can do now is to study hard and make progress in our studies．Only in this way can we live up to their expectations and take better care of our aged parents in the future．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇开放作文，让我们根据央视公益广告Family给校英语报写一篇立志学习，感恩父母的文章，描述图片要表达的内容和意义并谈谈你的感受．
这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：感恩父母，描述图片要表达的内容和意义并谈谈你的感受．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为描述图片内容和意义．第二部分为作者的感受．
重点短语与句型：
take on the responsibility  承担责任
arouse  social concern引起社会关注
take measures to do sth 采取措施做某事
take…for granted视…为理所当然
in return for 作为回报
高分句型一：As is vividly shown in the picture，the word family represents three people，who are father，mother and I．此句as，who引导定语从句．
高分句型二：It's high time that we took measures to show gratitude to them．此句It's high time that 虚拟语气
高分句型三：What we can do now is to study hard and make progress in our studies．此句用了what引导主语从句
高分句型四：Only in this way can we live up to their expectations and take better care of our aged parents in the future．此句only+介词短语，主句部分倒装

解答 As is vividly shown in the picture，the word family represents three people，who are father，mother and I．（高分句型一）When I was young，father was the most important person in my family．My mother took good care of me and protected me from wind and rain．Later I grow up．I take on the responsibility to look after my parents．I realize that the family also means father and mother I love you．The picture mirrors a common phenomenon，which has aroused our social concern．Undoubtedly，our parents have made a lot of sacrifices．It's high time that we took measures to show gratitude to them．（高分句型二 ）What's more，we shouldn't take our parents'love for granted．Instead，we are supposed to appreciate it from the bottom of our hearts．（描述图片内容和意义）
     From my point of view，we ought to show our affection to our beloved parents．Now it is time for us to do what we can in return for their hard work．What we can do now is to study hard and make progress in our studies（高分句型三）．Only in this way can we live up to their expectations and take better care of our aged parents in the future．（高分句型四）（作者的感受）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．