题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,是将来北京参加冬令营活动的英国高中生Tom的接待家庭。请根据以下提示给Tom写信电子邮件,告知相关事宜。
内容要点:1.机场接机;2.单独卧室, 可以上网;3.陪同浏览北京。
注意:1. 词数不少于100;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
My parents and I are so happy that you are coming to stay with us.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Tom,
My parents and I are so happy that you’re coming to stay with us next month.
We’re going to pick you up at the airport when you arrive. We have arranged a separate room for you, and there is a computer in it. You can get on line whenever you want. I hope you will feel comfortable and convenient here. Beijing has its special beauty in winter. I’d like to be your tour guide in your spare time. Since both of us are teenagers, I believe we have a lot in common and will have a good time together.
Looking forward to seeing you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析:假定你是李华,是将来北京参加冬令营活动的英国高中生Tom的接待家庭。请根据以下提示给Tom写信电子邮件,告知相关事宜。内容要点:1.机场接机;2.单独卧室, 可以上网;3.陪同浏览北京。这是一篇明显的提纲作文,就是把文章的情景和内容要求分成块,以条目的形式列出以进行写作。考生在审题的时候应该注意审要求、审文体、审人称、审时态。题文已经告知要求,那么文体应为书信文体,即介绍主要行程;又根据“你是李华” 写作时即用第一人称“我”,即李华;时态主要用一般现在时即可或一般将来时。考生在写作时应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型,将要点逐条表达出来。表达时应该综合运用所掌握的知识,避开生僻的词汇,并克服母语的干扰,按照英语的习惯方式,用地道的英语表达出来,力求做到语言准确无误。然后根据要点选词组句,然后按照篇章结构连句成篇。
【亮点说明】本文语言凝练,论点鲜明,条理层次清晰。文章第一段就开门见山切入父母们在欢迎对方的到来,让对方有一种亲切感。第二段具体阐释了对方在北京的主要安排。文章使用了when引导的时间状语从句We’re going to pick you up at the airport when you arrive.(你到达时我们将去机场接你);since引导的原因状语从句,Since both of us are teenagers, I believe we have a lot in common and will have a good time together(既然我们都是青少年,我相信我们都有共同点,将一起度过美好的时光);whenever引导的让步状语从句:You can get on line whenever you want.(你何时想上网就上网)。高级短语和结构:pick up用车接某人,do well in在某方面做得好;再如have a lot in common有许多共同点。最后一句使用look forward to doing sth期待做某事,给文章一个完美的结束。