Question

【题目】假如你是李华。你的美国朋友Alex来信说，考试临近时，他总会感到焦虑。请你给他回信。内容：

1.向Alex表示问候和安慰。

2.提出建议。（至少两点）

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Alex,

I’m sorry to hear that you feel anxious before exams, which is actually quite nutural among students. But this situation can be easily changed if you take my advice.

Above all, you should keep a good state of mind. That is to say, you need to have confidence in yourself and look at everything positively. Additionally, it is advisable for you to listen to music, take exercise and communicate with your friends, which helps to get rid of pressure. Last but not least, what really matters is to keep trying and never give up.

I hope you will find these ideas useful.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封信，向美国朋友提出针对考试焦虑的建议。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1. 表示问候和安慰

2. 给出建议

1）培养自信

2）寻求一些减压方法

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

be anxious about；exam；suggestion；change；develop confidence；get rid of；useful；take one’s advice；look forward to

第三步：连词成句

1. But this situation can be easily changed if you take my advice.

2.Above all, you should keep a good state of mind.

3.That is to say, you need to have confidence in yourself and look at everything positively.

4. Additionally, it is advisable for you to listen to music, take exercise and communicate with your friends, which helps to get rid of pressure.

5.Last but not least, what really matters is to keep trying and never give up.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改