Question

11．阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文．
How early must a student begin preparing for an international education？Lisa Jain，the representative of The College Board in India showed her idea here clearly．
Many students who want to study abroad believe they need to start planning for it only in Grade12．What they don't realize is the amount of time，thought，and effort it requires．That is why a student should begin the ground work in Grade 10in order to gain a clear undestanding of what the college application process requires and to be prepared to deal with the pressures that will follow．
Focus on school grades and marks．It is important to try your best to perform well in academics throughout high school and not just in Grade 12．
Start gaining experience．Get involved in a small number of activities ove a long period of time，such as a sport，the arts，writing，research，community work，etc，through which you create impact in the activity，climb to a leadership position，grow as a person and develop skills．Picking something in Grade 12and claiming it's your passion won't work．
Begin research．Which country do you want to apply to colleges in？What do you want to study at college？Researching early and start reflecting on what you'd enjoy learning will make the college and major selection process less overwhelming in Grade 12．
All your efforts in Grade 10-11will help ease your burden in Grade 12．If you do everything at the right time，you will find the process enjoyable and realize there is hardly a reason to stress．Just remember：The early birds catch the worms!
写作内容
1．用约30个词概括上文的主要内容．
2．用约120个词就"The early birds catch the worms．"谈谈你的想法，内容包括：
（1）你如何理解"The early birds catch the worms．"这一谚语？
（2）以你或他人的经历说明一切成功源于凡事早做规划，充足准备．
（3）如何才能成为"the early birds"？
写作要求
1．作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文的句子．
2．作文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称．
评分标准
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯．
In the passage，Lisa Jain offered her advice to those wanting to study abroad，pointing out that，to be prepared，a student should begin the ground work early in Grade 10，like focusing on good grades from the very beginning．
The early birds catch the worms!What a thought-provoking proverb，which reminds us to plan ahead of time and make full preparations so as to achieve success．In my opinion，"the early birds"means the people who always make early plans and adequate preparations，and"catch worms"indicates catching opportunities and harvesting success．Just as another saying goes，opportunities are for those who are prepared．Only if a person has an early start to get everything ready can he possess the ability to seize the chance and accomplish his goal．
Yu Ming Hong，the founder of the famous educational institution New Oriental，is a good illustration of the truth that success lies in an early start and good preparations． When studying in Peking university，aiming to find a good job in Beijing after graduation，Yu Ming Hong decided to improve his major English．So，from the freshman year，he kept reciting words every day and stuck to it all the way through his college life． With an early start and constant efforts，by the time he graduated，he had become the student who had the largest vocabulary among his classmates，which contributed directly to his good grades in English and thus he successfully became an English teacher in Peking University and later set up the well-known school．Undoubtedly，it was his"being the early bird"that brought him his success today．
Therefore，be an early bird，and you will find it pays off．But how？First of all，a clear goal is essential，which will lead us to where we want to go．Secondly，plan the day and manage our time．Early birds never fails to carefully plan and make the best of his time．And then painstaking efforts follow．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是读写任务型写作，这类作文可按照三段式模板写：第一段：概况所给短文要点．第二段：过渡词引出主题句---阐述理由．第三段：个人观点．特别要注意第一段的概括．用自己的语言概括，不能照搬照抄原文． 时态用一般现在时．人称用第一和第三人称． 重要短语：offered sth to sb （提供某物给某人…），point out（指出），focus on（集中在…），a thought-provoking proverb （一个发人深省的谚语），remind us to do sth（提醒某人做某事），ahead of time （提前），make full preparations（作充分准备），so as to…（为了…），seize the chance（抓住机会），accomplish one's goal（实现某人的目标），lie in（在于…），aim to do sth（目的在于），stick to…（坚持…），contribute to（为…作贡献；促成），set up（建立…），pay off （获得成功），fail to do sth（没能做某事），make the best of one's time（充分利用时间）．
【高分句型一】
1．What a thought-provoking proverb，which reminds us to plan ahead of time and make full preparations so as to achieve success．
此处是由关系代词"which"引导的非限制性定语从句，"which"在从句中作主语，指代前面整个主句的内容．
【高分句型二】
2．"the early birds"means the people who always make early plans and adequate preparations，
此处是"who"引导的定语从句，先行词为"the people"．
【高分句型三】
3．Only if a person has an early start to get everything ready can he possess the ability to seize the chance and accomplish his goal．
此处是部分倒装结构，结构为"Only+【状语成分：介词短语/when、if引导的从句/时间副词】+一般疑问句形式"．
【高分句型四】
4．①When studying in Peking university，②aiming to find a good job in Beijing after graduation，Yu Ming Hong decided to improve his major English．
①此处是由连词"when"引导的时间状语从句中的省略，可以理解为"When Yu Ming Hong was studying in Peking university"．
②此处是由现在分词短语"aiming to do…"作目的状语，主句为"Yu Ming Hong decided to improve his major English"，主句的主语为"Yu Ming Hong"与动词"aim"构成逻辑上的主动关系．
【高分句型五】
5．With an early start and constant efforts，by the time he graduated，he had become the student ①who had the largest vocabulary among his classmates，②which contributed directly to his good grades in English and thus he successfully became an English teacher in Peking University and later set up the well-known school．
①此处为关系代词"who"引导的定语从句，先行词为"the student"，"who"在从句中主语．
②此处是由关系代词"which"引导的非限制性定语从句，关系代词"which"在从句中作主语，指代前面整个主句的内容．

解答 In the passage，Lisa Jain offered her advice to those wanting to study abroad，pointing out that，to be prepared，a student should begin the ground work early in Grade 10，like focusing on good grades from the very beginning．（概括）
The early birds catch the worms!What a thought-provoking proverb，which reminds us to plan ahead of time and make full preparations so as to achieve success．【高分句型一】In my opinion，"the early birds"means the people who always make early plans and adequate preparations，【高分句型二】and"catch worms"indicates catching opportunities and harvesting success．Just as another saying goes，opportunities are for those who are prepared．Only if a person has an early start to get everything ready can he possess the ability to seize the chance and accomplish his goal．【高分句型三】（如何理解这一谚语）
Yu Ming Hong，the founder of the famous educational institution New Oriental，is a good illustration of the truth that success lies in an early start and good preparations． When studying in Peking university，aiming to find a good job in Beijing after graduation，Yu Ming Hong decided to improve his major English．【高分句型四】So，from the freshman year，he kept reciting words every day and stuck to it all the way through his college life． With an early start and constant efforts，by the time he graduated，he had become the student who had the largest vocabulary among his classmates，which contributed directly to his good grades in English and thus he successfully became an English teacher in Peking University and later set up the well-known school．【高分句型五】Undoubtedly，it was his"being the early bird"that brought him his success today．（以他人的经历说明一切成功源于凡事早做规划，充足准备）
Therefore，be an early bird，and you will find it pays off．But how？First of all，a clear goal is essential，which will lead us to where we want to go．Secondly，plan the day and manage our time．Early birds never fails to carefully plan and make the best of his time．And then painstaking efforts follow．（个人观点：如何才能成为"the early birds"）

点评 读写任务型写作是将阅读与写作有机结合，要求考生既能读懂文章信息，又要依据要求规范连贯地表达内容，其中准确概括很有挑战且十分重要，根据记叙文、议论文、说明文等不同文体作相应概括，总的来说，遵循以下步骤：确定主题句；寻找关键词；重构主题句；重组支持句．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．