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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Peter,

I have received your e-mail. I am very exciting at the good news that you have admitted into Harvard. First I’d like to offer my congratulation to you on your great success.

Since you know, I’m busy preparing for the College Entrance Examination. Day after day I work very hard but have to stay up later doing piles of papers. Therefore, I’m always feeling stressed out because of my efforts seem to be fruitless, which had made me upset and tired. Will you be kind enough to give some advice on how to do?

I would appreciate that if you could write back to me as soon as possible.

Yours,

Li Hua

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After her husband had gone to work,Mrs.Richards send her children to school and went upstairs to her bedroom.She was too excited to do any housework that morning.

In the evening she would go to a fancy dress party with her husband.She wanted to dress up as a ghost and as she had made her costume the night before,she was impatient to try it on.Though the costume consisted only of a sheet,it was really splendid.After putting it on,She went downstairs to find out whether it would be comfortable to wear.

Just as Mrs.Richards was entering the dining-room,there was a knock on the front door.She knew it must be the baker.She had told him to come straight in if ever she failed to open the door and to leave the bread on the table.Not wanting to frighten the poor man,she quickly hid in the smell store-room under the stair.She heard the front door opened and heavy footsteps in the hall.Suddenly the door of the store-room was opened and in came a man.Mrs.Richards realized it must be the man from the Electricity Board who had come to read the meter.She tried to explain the situation,saying "It's only me." but it was too late,the man let out a cry and jumped back several paces.When Mrs.Richards walked towards him,he fled,losing the door heavily behind him.

1.The reason for Mrs.Richards' excitement that day was that .

A. she was to attend an evening party B. she had sent her children to school

C. she wouldn't do any housework that morning D. she had made a special costume the night before

2.Mrs.Richards went downstairs with the costume on so as to .

A. frighten the person who was knocking on the door B. find out if she had finished the costume

C. made sure that the costume fitted her well D. receive the bread and do some cooking

3.The man who was knocking at the door was .

A. a baker B. an electricity man C. a thief D. her husband

4.What did the man do after he knocked on the front door?

A. He entered just as Mrs.Richards had told him to.

B. He did not do anything as Mrs.Richards had expected him to.

C. He went straight in so as to find Mrs.Richards.

D. He stepped directly towards the meter.

I live in a big city with a lot of homeless people．Luckily there’re ____21____ ways of helping them and you needn't have a lot of ____22____. One way to help is to buy their monthly magazine. ____23____ doing this one day, I got to ____24____ a young homeless man. He was often ____25____ the magazine at the train station.

He was a poor farmer from another country. After a while, I discovered that his ____26____ was close to mine. It ____27____ that we were born in the same month.

I met him last year ____28____ after his birthday, and after congratulating him, without ____29____, I asked if he had had a good day. He ____30____ and said that he hadn’t really celebrated. I felt so ____31____.

I just couldn't bear the thought of this nice, young man being ____32____ on his 25th birthday with no friends, no presents, no cake, nothing! So I went home and looked in my yarn(纱线) basket. Luckily for me, I had enough yarn ____33____. I set to work and knitted(编织) a ____34____ for the young man. The yarn had become a little dirty ____35____ I didn't knit very often. Then I washed the yarn so the scarf(围巾) would be ____36____ when he got it.

I met him on my own birthday as I was going shopping. I had ____37____ to meet him so I had ____38____ the scarf and a piece of my own birthday cake around with me. He was very ____39____ with these gifts and so was I. The tears in his eyes was the best ____40____ he could have given me.

1.A. correct B. basic C. small D. cheap

2.A. work B. energy C. money D. experience

3.A. In B. On C. With D. By

4.A. like B. realize C. meet D. know

5.A. selling B. delivering C. releasing D. collecting

6.A. birthday B. house C. height D. age

7.A. said B. discovered C. thought D. meant

8.A. suddenly B. shortly C. eventually D. instantly

9.A. preparing B. permitting C. thinking D. greeting

10.A. looked up B. turned up C. looked down D. calmed down

11.A. foolish B. helpless C. nervous D. confused

12.A. unforgettable B. unbelievable C. alone D. hungry

13.A. used B. prepared C. left D. produced

14.A. scarf B. sweater C. cap D. glove

15.A. though B. since C. unless D. and

16.A. different B. clean C. beautiful D. new

17.A. liked B. hoped C. promised D. agreed

18.A. made B. brought C. received D. carried

19.A. happy B. surprised C. satisfied D. frightened

20.A. reward B. opportunity C. surprise D. present

When The New Republic magazine predicted who would win the 2016 Nobel Prize in literature on Oct 6, it said：“Not Bob Dylan. That’s for sure.”

But the award came as a surprise to many. On Oct 13, the famous US musician was named the Nobel laureate by the Swedish Academy. He has “created new poetic expressions within the great American song tradition", according to the organization.

Although Dylan, 75, is not really thought to be a literary writer, he has given the world a lot of creative work over 50 years, especially when it comes to his folk songs.

In his 1985 album Biograph, Dylan wrote about the appeal of folk music to him. Rock songs “weren’t serious enough or didn’t reflect life in a realistic way", according to Dylan. But folk, was “a more serious type of thing. The songs are filled with more sadness; more joy …much deeper feelings".

Dylan’s music and lyrics spoke to many people during the 1960s. His lyrics were often about great political issues, such as the civil rights movement. The 1960s were a time of change when the young were making sure that their voices were heard. The idea is most famously expressed in Dylan's The Times They Are a -Changin (1964), which warns the world, “You better start swimming or you'll sink like a stone. For the times they are a-changin！”

There were complaints that a literary prize had been given to a singer. But ancient “Greek poets Homer and Sappho wrote poetic works that were meant to be listened to, that were meant to be performed, often with instruments — and it’s the same way with Dylan", the Swedish Academy’s permanent secretary Sara Danius told CNN.

It could even be said that giving the important prize to Dylan has brought back an old literary tradition. The millions whose lives Dylan’s words and music have changed will surely welcome the award.

1.Dylan found folk music attractive because ________.

A. it brought joy to people

B. it could be used to express feelings freely

C. it reflected life on a much deeper level

D. it needed more creativity than other types of music

2.Which of the following statements is TRUE about Dylan according to the article?

A. He never thought that he would win the Nobel Prize.

B. Most of his influential works were created in the 1960s.

C. His songs expressed people’s feelings well during the 1960s.

D. His fans were mostly young people who were active in political movements.

3.According to the last two paragraphs, ________.

A. lyrics can be seen as a literary form

B. a literary prize should not be given to a singer

C. Dylan’s works were inspired by Greek poets

D. Dylan deserves the award because he influenced many songwriters

4.What’s the author’s attitude toward giving Bob Dylan the 2016 Nobel Prize in literature?

A. supportive B. objective C. sceptical D. ambiguous

The Fitting-in of Suzy Khan

The first time I saw Suzy Khan, I knew I had to help her. She was really small for her age of 12. The boy in my class often____about her and laughed their heads off. She would open a book, pretending to read, with tears dropping on the open page.

All I knew was that she was an orphan (孤儿) from Africa. She had just been adopted by a family in town who____that the best way for her to learn American ways of life was to be with American kids. I looked down at this____girl and promised myself that somehow I would help her.

But how could I help her____in with us? There had to be a____

One day, when I went into the classroom, I saw that Suzy had____her geography book to a picture of a train, and in her notebook, she had made a(n)____copy.

I was surprised and thought that she could do something in the coming____show. So, I took her to see the art teacher, Miss Parker, and showed her what Suzy had____. “Why, it’s wonderful,” said Miss Parker, who then showed us a poster she had painted____the talent show. “I need more of these, but I just don’t have enough____. Could you help me, Suzy?”

On the day of the talent show, Suzy’s____were everywhere — all over the hall and all over the school, each one different.

“And finally,” said Mr. Brown, the schoolmaster, at the end of the show, “we have a (n)____award. I’m sure you’ve all noticed the wonderful posters.” Everyone nodded. “One of our own students____them.”

I could hear everyone whispering. “Who in our school could draw____well?”

Mr. Brown waited a while before saying, “____this student worked so hard on the posters, she deserves a____, too. Our mystery(神秘) artist is our new student — Suzy Khan!”

Mr. Brown thanked her for all the wonderful posters and gave her a professional artist’s set. “Thank you,” she cried.

I____, at that time when I was looking at her excited face, she’d probably never____anything in her whole life.

Everyone started to____their hands. Suzy Khan gave them a shy smile and the applause was deafening. I knew then Suzy was going to be all right.

1.A. joked B. cared C. trains D. worried

2.A. reported B. decided C. complained D. questioned

3.A. rich B. proud C. tiny D. popular

4.A. come B. fall C. fit D. tie

5.A. manner B. pattern C. choice D. way

6.A. read B. taken C. opened D. put

7.A. free B. perfect C. final D. extra

8.A. art B. talk C. quiz D. talent

9.A. colored B. written C. carved D. drawn

10.A. at B. after C. for D. around

11.A. room B. time C. paper D. interest

12.A. gifts B. books C. photos D. posters

13.A. special B. academic C. national D. royal

14.A. painted B. found C. printed D. collected

15.A. very B. that C. quite D. too

16.A. If B. Though C. Unless D. Since

17.A. prize B. rank C. rest D. place

18.A. replied B. realized C. remembered D. regretted

19.A. offered B. valued C. owned D. controlled

20.A. clap B. wave C. raise D. shake

Bob Dylan has own the 2016 Nobel Prize in Literature, announced Sara Danius, Swedish Academy’s permanent secretary, on Oct. 13, 2016 in Stockholm, Sweden.

The Swedish Academy said it chose Dylan for having created new poetic expressions within the great American song tradition. “As an artist, he is outstandingly all-round: he has been an active painter and actor," said the official statement. U. S. President Barack Obama congratulated Dylan on Twitter, describing him as one of his favorite poets.

Singer and songwriter Dylan is recognized worldwide for the influence he has had on music. He became a symbol of the 1960s counterculture (反主流文化) but his voice has reached widely into the American past. Since early in his career, Dylan has experimented with the combination of the literary and the musical.

Dylan had been mentioned in the Nobel prediction for years, but few experts expected the academy to extend the award to a genre (体裁) such as pop music. He’s the first American winner of the Nobel Literature Prize since Toni Morrison in 1992. The choice was met by a long round of applause from journalists attending the prize announcement. Sara Danius said that while Dylan performs his poetry in the form of songs, that’s no different from the ancient Greeks, whose works were often performed to music.

Dylan’s early rock classics such as The Times They Are A-Changin’, and A Hard Rains Gonna Fall, help to get cross the thoughts and feelings of the counterculture. The music publication Rolling Stone released a list of the “100 Greatest Bob Dylan Songs” in honor of his 75th birthday earlier this year.

1.What’s the main idea of Paragraph 2?

A. What Nobel Prize Dylan won in 2016.

B. How Dylan influences music worldwide.

C. Who congratulated Dylan on winning the prize.

D. Why Dylan was awarded the Nobel Literature Prize.

2.Which of the following can replace the underlined word “extend” in Paragraph 4?

A. allocate B. deliver C. offer D. compensate

3.What do we know about Dylan from the text?

A. He is Barack Obama’s favorite finger.

B. He performs poetry in the form of songs.

C. He had never been expected to win a Nobel Prize.

D. He is the first American to win the Nobel Literature Prize.

4.What’s the journalists’ attitude towards Dylan’s winning the Nobel Literature Prize?

A. Favorable. B. Objective. C. Skeptical. D. Uncaring.

根据和短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项多余选项。

Are you really happy? Do you ever know what it means to be happy and what it takes to achieve(到达) happiness?

1.

*Make a plan for attaining goals that will make you happy.Your happiness is likely to increase if you achieve

the goals you set.

*Make friends with happy people.It is easy to begin to feel dowen when you are surrounded by people who always fees upset.2.

*Spend a few minutes each day thinking about the things that make you happy.3.

*4. Whether you treat yourself to lunch,take a long,relaxing bath or simply spend a few extra minutes on your appearance,you will be unconsciously feeling better.

*Finding the humour in situations can also lead to happiness.Find a way to make light of a situation,which will make you happy.

*5. Being overweight or not eating nutritious foods can have a bad effect on your mood.

A.Everyone has different requirement for happiness.What makes one person happy may be very different from what makes someone else happy.

B.However,if you are around people who are happy,you will be happy too.

C.Keeping healthy is another way to achieve happiness.

D.The following are a few tips that I follow to create happiness in my life.

E.These few minutes will give you the chance to think about the happy things in your life and will lead you to continuous happiness.

F.Different people have different opinions about happiness.

G.It’s also important to take some time each day to do something nice for yourself.

根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。

Ways to Help Your Teen Adjust to a New School

In an ideal world, a teen could start and finish their schooling at the same school.1.. And while a move to a new city can be stressful for the entire family, it may be especially difficult for your teenager. Use these strategies to help your teen adjust to a new school.

2.

The adjustment period begins before your teen ever steps foot into the new school. Point out the new opportunities that’ll be available. If you have confidence that you can make it a new city or a new job, your teen will feel more confident about his ability to succeed in a new school.

Listen to your teen’s concerns

If you don’t have an open relationship with your teen currently, now it is the time to build one. It’s easiest to get him to open up when he’s feeling unsure. 3..Is he worried about new teachers? Does he doubt his ability to make the basketball team?

Talk about your reasons for moving

4.. If you’re preparing for a better career opportunity, or you need to find a new house because you can’t afford to stay where you are, talk about it.

Learn about the new school ahead of time

Conduct as much research as possible about the new school before your teen starts attending. Get your teen to find out about the size of the school and the types of classes offered.5..Talking to a network guidance counselor ahead of time can also be helpful.

A. Keep a positive attitude

B. Develop your teen’s different abilities

C. Keep asking questions about his biggest concerns

D. Be honest with your teen about why you’re moving

E. Most schools have websites that offer a wealth of information

F. Joining a club or playing a sport can be a great way for your teen

G. However, when a family must move, a teenager must switch schools

假定你是李华，你的美国笔友David对你校开设的一些选修课（optional course）非常感兴趣，来信向你询问有关事宜。请根据以下内容提示给他写封回信。

1.选修课程包括：英语戏剧，模型制作（model making）等；

2.每门课程的优点；

3.你希望增加的课程及理由。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear David,

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

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