题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter对中国古典名著《西游记》感兴趣,他给你写信询问有关情况。请给他写封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.《西游记》内容简介;
2. 阅读建议。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:classic n.名著; Journey to the West 《西游记》
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【答案】Dear Peter,
I'm delighted to learn you're interested in Journey to the West, one of the four Chinese greatest classics, written by Wu Cheng'en.
Based on Xuan Zang's journey to India, the novel is very popular with Chinese people. The story focuses on Monkey King called Sun Wukong, who helps his master Xuan Zang overcome various difficulties on the journey. You may find it challenging to read the original classic, so I advise you read the simplified versions. Some versions come with many pictures, which makes it easy for readers like you to understand.
Hopefully you will fall in love with this great work.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文体裁的提纲类写作,要求考生写一封邮件,在邮件中写明:为Peter对中国古典名著《西游记》感兴趣而感到高兴;简要介绍《西游记》内容;阅读这本书的建议。
第一步:审题
体裁:一般性应用文——书信(邮件)
格式:格式是书信,要写明写信的对象(即称呼)和写信人(即署名),正文前可适当添加问候语,还要有结尾语
要点:要包括三个要点——1. 知道Peter对中国古典名著《西游记》感兴趣,感到高兴;2. 简要介绍《西游记》内容;3. 阅读这本书的建议。
结构:总分总法
第二步:列提纲(重点短语和词汇)
be interested in; Journey to the West; classics; be popular with; focus on; overcome; original; advise; great work
第三步:连词成句
It’s great that you're interested in Journey to the West. The novel is the great work.
It’s written by Wu Cheng'en.
It is very popular with Chinese people.
The story is about Xuan Zang's journey to India.
Monkey King called Sun Wukong helps his master Xuan Zang overcome many difficulties.
I advise you read the simplified versions.
You’ll find it interesting.
第四步:连句成篇
第五步:润色修改