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3．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词．
      2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month．It is in the downtown area，but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport．We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath．What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room．I checked my email messages every day．I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing．The food was wonderful with reasonable prices，and we enjoyed several local dish．It is such great hotel what I would recommend it to any friend of mine who is going to Beijing．

分析 本文作者通过介绍自己在北京南湖宾馆的亲身感受，旨在向要去北京的朋友们推荐南湖宾馆；另外，本文还从南湖宾馆的地理位置，交通条件，房间的设施，网络以及饭菜的情况等方面进行了介绍．

解答 My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we
visit Beijing last month．It is in the downtown area，but it is easy
to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport．We lived in a
comfortablydouble-room with a big bath．What I liked best were the
free high-speed Internet connection in the room．I checked my email
messages every day．I also shared for my friends many photos taking
in Beijing．The food was wonderful with reasonable prices，and we
enjoyed several local dish．It is such∧great hotel what I would recommend
it to any friend of mine who is going to Beijing．
详解：
1．visit改为visited      根据时间状语"last month"，可知此处指的是发生在上个月的事情，应使用一般过去时；故用visited．
2．but改为and/so     考查句意理解以及连词    本句的意思是：它在市区，（所以）从酒店乘坐公共交通工具可以很容易去任何地方；此处表示并列/因果，而不是转折；故用and．
3．去掉anywhere 之前的to    考查副词    由于anywhere是副词，所以它的前面不能加介词；故去掉anywhere 之前的to． 
4．comfortably改为comfortable    考查形容词     此处用来修饰名词double-room，故用形容词comfortable．
5．were改为was   考查主谓一致    由于本句的主语是一个由What 引导的从句，所以谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式；故用was．
6．for改为with     考查固定短语    share with意为：与某人分享某物；故用with．
7．taking改为taken   考查过去分词    此处在句中作后置定语，修饰名词 photos；由于动词take与该名词之间是动宾关系；故用过去分词taken．
8．dish改为dishes    考查名词的单复数    此处指的是：几种当地菜；故用dishes．
9．great之前加a   此处用来修饰名词hotel，表示泛指"一家好的酒店"；故在great之前加a．
10．what改为that    考查固定结构   such…that…意为：如此…以至于…；本句的意思是：这是一家如此好的酒店，以至于我将推荐给我要去北京的任何一位朋友；故用that．

点评 短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题，主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力．错误类型一般有：缺词、多词和错词．常见的错误有：1 词法错误，主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此类试题时，需要正确分析句子成分，熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常见句法错误．通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误．解答此类试题时，需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法．3 应在理解文章大意的前提下，进行作答．

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