题目内容
7.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之问交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Boys and girls,
May I have your attention,please?Today I'm supposing to say something about students watch TV.As we know,in our daily lives,TV plays an important part.It is quicker and more convenient to get information from TV as from newspapers.Providing us with vividly and lively pictures,TV enables us not only to see what was happening in the world but also to learn many things,including foreign languages.However,it is not reasonable to forbid students watch such programs.But watching TV for too long is not good.Sitting in the front of TV all day does harm to our eyes and wastes our time on study.So you should take a right attitude towards it.
Thank you for your listening.
分析 作者在本文讲述了电视的两面性,一方面电视带给我们各方面的知识,不能绝对禁止看电视;另一方面,看电视时间过长会有害健康,耽误学习,因此我们应该对此采取一个正确的态度.
解答 Boys and girls,
May I have your attention,please?Today I'm supposing to say something about students watch TV.As we know,in our daily lives,TV plays an important part.It is quicker and more convenient to get information from TV as from newspapers.Providing us with vividly and lively pictures,TV enables us not only to see what was happening in the world but also to learn many things,including foreign languages.However,it is not reasonable to forbid students∧watch such programs.But watching TV for too long is not good.Sitting in the front of TV all day does harm to our eyes and wastes our time on study.So you should take a right attitude towards it.
Thank you for your listening.
详解:
1.supposing改为supposed;考查固定搭配,be supposed to do 是固定搭配,意为"应该".
2.watch改为watching;考查非谓语动词,介词about后面跟动名词形式.
3.lives改为life;考查名词,这里life意为"生活",是不可数名词,没有复数形式.
4.as改为than;考查连词,根据句子的比较级形式quicker and more convenient 可知此处用比较连词than.
5.vividly改为vivid;考查形容词,此处用形容词与lively并列作定语修饰pictures.
6.was改为is;考查动词的时态,本文通篇用一般现在时陈述一个事实情况,此处也要用一般现在时,
7.However改为So/Therefore/Thus;考查连词,结合上下文分析前后为因果关系,故用 So/Therefore/Thus表示"因此,所以".
8.students后加to;考查动词的不定式,forbid sb to do sth 是固定搭配,意为"禁止某人做某事".
9.去掉the;考查毒的短语,in front ofin front of 是在整个物体的前面,in the front of in the front of是在物体内部的前面,结合句意,此处应该去掉the.
10.you改为we;考查人称代词,分析句意为"因此我们应该对此采取一个正确的态度",故用we.
点评 整体理解短文,充分运用所学的基础知识,包括一些实词和虚词的用法,固定短语搭配,习惯性用法,结合上下文整体关系,找出错误并加以修正.

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41.A.if | B.so | C.but | D.or |
42.A.work | B.study | C.journey | D.exploration |
43.A.came across | B.picked up | C.learned from | D.took away |
44.A.hid | B.opened | C.examined | D.ignored |
45.A.worried | B.anxious | C.thirsty | D.tired |
46.A.refused | B.avoided | C.received | D.accepted |
47.A.lent | B.bought | C.made | D.offered |
48.A.again | B.still | C.only | D.just |
49.A.imagined | B.realized | C.announced | D.pretended |
50.A.played around | B.sat around | C.turned around | D.got around |
51.A.gave | B.promised | C.supplied | D.begged |
52.A.left | B.called | C.missed | D.returned |
53.A.joy | B.confidence | C.disappointment | D.horror |
54.A.drink | B.food | C.face | D.smile |
55.A.sad | B.nervous | C.amazed | D.excited |
56.A.same | B.strange | C.unique | D.unusual |
57.A.replied | B.added | C.reminded | D.thought |
58.A.braver | B.shorter | C.younger | D.cleverer |
59.A.power | B.quality | C.favor | D.difficulty |
60.A.differently | B.proudly | C.calmly | D.kindly. |
A. | draw | B. | had drawn | C. | drew | D. | drawing |