Question

15．你班召开了一堂以"因特网对我们生活的影响"为主题的班会课，同学们进行了热烈的讨论，结果大致如下：

约55%的同学认为英特网对我们的生活有正面的影响	约45%的同学认为英特网对我们的生活有负面的影响
1．轻点鼠标就可以获得英特网上不断更新的信息； 2．通过英特网我们可以与遥远地方的人们取得联系；	1．因特网的一大缺点是人们很难知道网上信息是否真实和准确； 2．因特网毁坏了人们正常生活的能力和生活方式；
你的观点：1．…           2．…（至少2点）

请你根据以上提示写一篇短文．
注意：1．字数150词；
2．短文的开头已给出，不计入总字数．
We held a class meeting，where students had a heated discussion on the theme"The effects of the Internet on our lives"．

Answer 1

分析 图表类作文要求考生根据所给的写作要求，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作．本文的要点很全面，在个人观点方面考生可以从一分为二的辩证法出发，建议我们使用因特网好的一方面，摈弃不好的另外一方面．要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力．
亮点部分
As a new way of sharing information online，the Internet has won support with users of all ages．（高分句型）
 Furthermore，another truly wonderful aspect of the Internet is the way people use it to build social bonds．（高分句型） 
 Also，people who are disabled and must stay in their homes can correspond and communicate with others around the globe who have similar interests．（高分句型）
Yet，some students are skeptical，they think the main drawbacks of the Internet are that it has too much information that has not been evaluated for accuracy and that it is transforming the way people spend their time．（高分句型）
More importantly，people who spend too much time on the Internet tend to withdraw from the people and the world around them．（高分句型）

解答 The effects of the Internet on people's lives
    We held a class meeting，where students had a heated discussion on the theme"The effects of the Internet on our lives"．As a new way of sharing information online，the Internet has won support with users of all ages．（高分句型）Of course，different students have different opinions．Some students think the Internet has its obvious benefits．Firstly，Internet users can communicate with experts on all sorts of topics．Furthermore，another truly wonderful aspect of the Internet is the way people use it to build social bonds．（高分句型） Also，people who are disabled and must stay in their homes can correspond and communicate with others around the globe who have similar interests．（高分句型）
    Yet，some students are skeptical，they think the main drawbacks of the Internet are that it has too much information that has not been evaluated for accuracy and that it is transforming the way people spend their time．（高分句型）More importantly，people who spend too much time on the Internet tend to withdraw from the people and the world around them．（高分句型）
    As for me，every advantage has its disadvantage，with the development of the Internet，we should keep the balance between its benefits and drawbacks．Only by doing so，can we make the Internet truly service people．

点评 认真审题和分析所给的图表，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和图表之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态．根据所给图表，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当．语言力求准确、简洁．根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料．同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．