题目内容
【题目】假如你叫李华，是一名中学生。家乡的古刹历史悠久，闻名遐迩，游客如织，你为此而自豪。但你最近很苦恼，因为有些人打起了古刹的主意，想把它拆掉建成工厂。为保护古刹，你给某英语报社写一封信，提出以下几点建议：
1. 限制游客数量以保护古刹；2. 建立网站，供人们网上欣赏；3. 另选其他地点建立工厂。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总数。
Dear Editor,
I’m a student. I’ve been proud of Gucha, an old temple in my village.
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I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Editor,
I’m a student, I’ve been proud of Gucha, an old temple in my village. It’s a cultural relic with a long history, which makes it so famous that many tourists visit it every year.
But now I feel worried about it. Though much money is brought in, part of it has been badly destroyed. Worse still, some people in my village want to pull it down and build a new factory where the old temple is. It represents the past of my village, so it should be protected well.
The number of the visitors should be limited to protect the old temple. Also, a website should be built where people can look at the pictures of the temple without destroying its beauty. As for the factory, it should be built in some other places. Do you think so?
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析：考查应用文中的书信的写作。为保护古刹，你给某英语报社写一封信，提出以下几点建议。要点都已经给出，书信类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。审题时注意时态的选择，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。
【亮点说明】范文主要运用了现在时态，时态方面把握准确；范文使用了一些常用的短语：be proud of为……感到自豪；pull down拆掉；look forward to期待；which makes it so famous that many tourists visit it every year这句话用了非限制性定语从句；用worse still，as for使文章条理清晰，更加连贯。范文还多次运用should be done的被动语态，使文章语法内容更加丰富。
