Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你校正在开展“心怀感恩”教育活动。请你结合个人经历和下列要点，为校报的英语园地写一篇短文。
1)、感动你的人和事。
2)、表达感恩和祝福。
注意：1).词数100 左右；
2).可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3).开头语已为你写好。
Looking back on the past years(回首过去的几年),

Answer 1

【答案】Looking back on the past years, I couldn't help but think of Susan, my English teacher, who always encouraged me to get over any difficulty I encountered in high school. As the exam was approaching, Susan had a talk with me when noticing my stress and anxiety. By analyzing my test grades she asked me to believe my ability and relax myself. Her advice made me full of confidence and courage. Every time I was down, Susan was always the first person who gave me great comfort. My gratitude to Susan is beyond words. Without her assistance, I can not imagine how I can pass the life of high school smoothly. I wish her happiness and good luck in the future.


【解析】本题考查提纲类作文，要求考生以李华的身份校报的英语园地写一篇”心怀感恩“内容的短文，内容包括：1)、感动你的人和事；2)、表达感恩和祝福。本文应是一般过去时和一般现在时结合使用，注意不要出时态错误，人称以第一人称为主。试题所给要点比较简单，考生需要适当添加细节使用合适的连接词把孤立的要点联系成文。写作时同时也要使用一些高级的词汇和句式提升文章的档次分，提高文章的文采，提高获得高分的可能性。