Question

【题目】在繁重的课业负担之下，中学生也应该学会适度地自我放松。请你围绕“Ways to get relaxed”这一话题，按照下列要点写一篇100词左右的英语短文：

1．自我放松的途径：体育锻炼、听音乐、上网等；

2．我更喜欢的途径及理由。

注意：1.在表达“我更喜欢的途径及理由”时，请从要点1中选择一项进行阐述；

2．文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

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Answer 1

【答案】There_are_various_ways_to_get_relaxed_for_middle_school_students. One way is to take exercise, such as walking, running, playing basketball or football, etc. We can also listen to music. Moreover, we can surf the Internet to get some relaxation and entertainment.

As far as I'm concerned, surfing the Internet appeals to me most. For one thing，the Internet offers a wide range of activities for relaxation. In general, I keep track of the latest news as an enjoyment. Sometimes, I play computer games to relax myself. For another, the Internet makes it easy for me to make friends with people at home and abroad, for it is a great joy to communicate with them. In addition, having a glimpse of the vivid pictures and live videos on the Internet contributes to regaining my energy.

【解析】书面表达的解题思路：

1.确定文章时态的基调，确定文章时态的基调对于整个写作非常重要。它直接决定了不同句子使用的时态正确与否。本文介绍自我放松的途径，应该使用一般现在时。

2. 给文章划分基本段落，仔细阅读题目要求和文字提示，领会要写的文章的主题，确定文章的段落，写出各段的主题句。本题中的内容要点有：①.引出话题并介绍自我放松的途径：体育锻炼、听音乐、上网等；②. 我更喜欢的途径及理由。这样确定文章的基本段落分为两段。

3.尝试用高级词汇，使可读性增强。美化句子可以采用复合句和特殊的句型结构，也可以采用形式主语、形式宾语或简略句来实现。

4.连句成篇，在连句成篇的过程中需要注意过渡句和连接词的使用。

【范文亮点】

For another, the Internet makes it easy for me to make friends with people at home and abroad, for it is a great joy to communicate with them.

句意：另一方面，互联网使我可以很容易地与国内外的人交朋友，因为与他们交流是一种极大的乐趣。

该句中使用了固定句型make it easy for sb. to do sth.，其中it是形式宾语，真正的宾语是后面的不定式。for引导一个原因状语从句，从句中it作形式主语，真正的主语是to communicate with them.