题目内容
假设你是Li Hua,初中阶段的学习已经结束,回想自己在师长的关爱和帮助下的成长过程,心中充满感激之情。请用英语给初中的老师写一封100词左右的信表示感谢。
Dear Miss/Mr….,
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Mr Wang.
Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you. You have taken good care of me since I came to this school. When I am in trouble,you always encourage me and cheer me up. You are kind but strict with us. You never allow us to pretend that we know what we don't know. You often tell us that it's no use memorizing new words without understanding. With your help,my English has greatly improved. Thank you for caring about me,and I will work harder in the future.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题,并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体,在发表个人观点的时候,可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语taken good care of照顾;be strict with 严格要求某人;allow sb to do 允许某人做某事;You have taken good care of me since I came to this school.这个句子用了since引导的从句用一般过去时主句用现在完成时;You never allow us to pretend that we know what we don't know.这个句子that引导的宾语从句,what引导know的宾语从句;You often tell us that it's no use memorizing new words without understanding.这个句子运用it is no us doing做某事没用;
考点: 提纲类作文