题目内容
【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Zhang Hua,
It has been a long time before we last met.I have been moved to my new house recently.So,I'm glad to invite you come to stay with us for two weeks during the summer vacation.Sandy Beach,it is near my new house,is a wonderfully place.There,we can play volleyball,have delicious food,enjoying the warm sunshine,or even bury our bodies in the sand.However,we can go to a seaside for fishing.If you come,you don't want to leave.Please tell me the vacation activities we like.Then I can make good preparations.I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ping
【答案】1.before-since
2.been去掉
3.invite you后加to
4.it-which
5.wonderfully-wonderful
6. enjoying-enjoy
7.However-Besides/Also
8.a-the
9.don't-won't
10.we-you
【解析】本文是一封信。主要表明作者想邀请朋友到自己的新家来玩儿,并制定了一系列游玩的计划。
1."It has been a long time before we last met."自从上次我们见面以来,已经好长时间了。before不能表达自从的意思。故将before改为since。
2."I have been moved to my new house recently."最近我搬到了新家。搬家是一个短暂性的动作,并不能一直搬。故去掉been。
3.invite sb. to do sth.邀请某人做某事。故invite you 后加to。
4."Sandy Beach,it is near my new house,is a wonderfully place.",其中it is near my new house用作定语修饰前面的名词,it不能用作定语从句的连接词。故将it改为which。
5.形容词修饰名词,故将其副词形式改为形容词。故将wonderfully改为wonderful。
6.we can后面的几个并列短句应保持一致,所以都要用原形形式。故将enjoying改为enjoy。
7.此处并非转折意义,而是顺承和递进的意义。故将However改为Besides或者Also。
8.seaside后有短语修饰,为特指。故将a改为the。
9.if条件从句,主句为一般现在时,则从句要用一般将来时。故将don't改为won't。
10."Please tell me the vacation activities we like."此处表达的意义应为:请告诉我你喜欢的假期活动,是在询问对方。故将we改为you。