题目内容
【题目】假设你是张华,你收到英国笔友Bob的一封电子邮件(见表一),请根据邮件内容和你所获得的海报(见表二)所提供的信息,给Bob回一封电子邮件。
注意:1.词数:100左右;
2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文章的开头已给出。
Dear Bob,
I'm so delighted to 1earn
【答案】
Dear Bob,
I’m so glad to learn that you’re coming to Beijing to study Chinese. I have got a lot of information about foreigners learning Chinese. Here I’d like to recommend you a famous language school——Red Star Language School. It happens to have such a Chinese training course that will satisfy your demands. It starts on Jan. 20th and lasts a month till Feb. 19th. It’s intended for beginners like you. Besides, the tuition is reasonable. It costs only RMB 2,000 ( about $240 ).
If you have some more questions, please let me know or just mail.
Hope to see you in Beijing soon.
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语would like to do 想要做某事; be intended for 为…而设计 ;I’m so glad to learn that you’re coming to Beijing to study Chinese这个句子that引导learn的宾语从句; It happens to have such a Chinese training course that will satisfy your demands这个句子中that引导course的定语从句;