Question

16．假定你是李越，你校图书馆最近新设了一个英语阅览室，很受学生欢迎．请用英语给阅览室外籍管理老师Peter写封信．信的主要内容包括：
1．阅览室给学生带来的好处（至少两点）；
2．阅览室仍需改进的建议（至少两点）．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Peter，
Recently the library of our school has set up an English Reading Room．The reading room，where we students can read English magazines，benefits us a lot．（高分句型一）It is convenient for us to enrich our lives and broaden our minds．What is more important is that it helps develop our interest in studying English．（高分句型二）
Despite the good it has done to us，I'd like to make some suggestions．（高分句型三）Have you considered opening it all weekdays instead of just on Friday afternoon？Besides，the limited number of books available is better to be enlarged．
I hope you will find these suggestions useful and thank you for your time．
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Yue．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假定你是李越，你校图书馆最近新设了一个英语阅览室，很受学生欢迎．请用英语给阅览室外籍管理老师Peter写封信，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：阅览室给学生带来的好处（至少两点）；阅览室仍需改进的建议（至少两点）．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：enrich our lives and broaden our minds丰富我们的生活，拓展我们的思想；Despite尽管；make some suggestions建议；Besides另外；
The reading room，where we students can read English magazines，benefits us a lot．（高分句型一）
What is more important is that it helps develop our interest in studying English．（高分句型二）
  Despite the good it has done to us，I'd like to make some suggestions．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Peter，
       Recently，the library of our school has set up an English Reading Room．The reading room，where we students can read English magazines，benefits us a lot．（高分句型一）It is convenient for us to enrich our lives and broaden our minds．What is more important is that it helps develop our interest in studying English．（高分句型二）
       Despite the good it has done to us，I'd like to make some suggestions．（高分句型三）Have you considered opening it all weekdays instead of just on Friday afternoon？Besides，the limited number of books available is better to be enlarged．
       I hope you will find these suggestions useful and thank you for your time．
       Beat wishes!
                                                                                                                                                                                                    Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                    Li Yue

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．