题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你市将主办第一届国际中国美食节(the First International Chinese Food Festival)。请你给外教Mr. Green发一封电子邮件邀请他一同前往。内容要点如下。
1. 美食节的时间、地点;
2. 活动的主要内容;
3. 交通方式。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Green,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Green,
In order to spread Chinese food culture, my city is going to host the First International Chinese Food Festival in two weeks. I’m writing to invite you to attend it with me.
It is to take place in the City Square from 14 to 16 in October. Some chefs will demonstrate key Chinese cooking skills with a wide variety of Chinese food raw materials on display and visitors are welcome to taste them for free. I think it is a good chance for you to experience Chinese culture. Since the City Square is located downtown, we can get there by bus or underground. If you are interested, please let me know.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封电子邮件。
第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封电子邮件;你校将举办“中华传统文化周”活动。请给你班的交换生Jim写封电子邮件,希望他一起参加。时态应为一般现在时和将来时。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定写作要点:首先,介绍活动的安排(如时间、地点、内容等);其次,说明活动的目的;最后,询问对方的意向。
第3步:根据写作要求及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如Some chefs will demonstrate key Chinese cooking skills with a wide variety of Chinese food raw materials on display and visitors are welcome to taste them for free.等等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。