题目内容
【题目】一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是“十年后的我”、请根据下列要求和你的想象完成短文、家庭工作业余生活.
注意:1、字数100左右; 2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 开头语已为你写好
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.
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【答案】
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family. Probably with a lovely child. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues, I will do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, I will travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful.
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达属于说明文,根据提示信息和要求来写作。写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。2、要在给出的信息范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照时间顺序进行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般将来时。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.是宾语从句。I will do a good job in whatever I do.是让步状语从句。此外,文章还多次使用I will…作为句子的开头,形成排比,使文章更有气势和条理。大量短语的使用,如:be like ,in the future,by then,get along well with,do a good job,In one’s free time,such as,In a word等使文章内容更具有层次感,也使语言更加连贯。